Reviews for Son of Neptune
snazzyflower chapter 7 . 5/15/2012
It seemed a little as though Jason was giving birth. You know, how he cried out and he was sweating and Annabeth was like, 'you can do it!'. Awwkkward... But good story! This is not a flame. Just a joke. :)
No Ordinary Fangirl chapter 21 . 12/25/2011
i love the story! it was sooooo good! just a couple questions/statements.

1. I think that Piper should have been with Sean.

2. was Daisy with Nico or Leo? i think she should've been with Leo.

3. what happened to Percy and Annabeth? Or Clarrise and Chris?

yes yes i know that the story is over, and its one of my favorites, but i just wanted to know.
LeaderColdenX chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
good prophecy. story's styleis alot like riordan's.
BleachBunneh chapter 19 . 10/23/2011
Nice story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
grossasstoenails chapter 18 . 10/12/2011
I like how you're continuing this despite the fact that the Son of Neptune came out already :)
Jeewon Lee chapter 17 . 9/24/2011
i love your story! please update!
God1801 chapter 17 . 9/19/2011
Love it
grossasstoenails chapter 16 . 9/9/2011
Erin Rachel chapter 15 . 9/4/2011
Eew, gross, no. Annabeth is and always will be in love with Percy and she's anxious to see him again, that's all. What gave you the idea that she's in love with Sean? I want to change it immediately. Sean's only romance existed a long time ago with Iris, but he doesn't remember any of that.
paulinejc chapter 15 . 9/4/2011
THIS IS A GREAT STORY! please update soon! :D
grossasstoenails chapter 15 . 9/3/2011
Annabeth's in love with Sean? ew no.
grossasstoenails chapter 14 . 8/24/2011
omg! the chicken-on-the-stick! nice twist :)
Erin Rachel chapter 12 . 8/17/2011
Wow, Erin, you're a really mediocre writer. Tell me more!

Sorry, I've just noticed that a lot of people get more reviews when they review themselves. Please take a hint, guys, I'm desperate for some new opinions!
AccountIsNoLongerBeingUsed chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
hmm, shouldn't annabeth lead the quest to find percy? i mean, it's her boyfriend. at least making jason leading the quest is reasonable, seeing that they probally were going to the roman camp. besides all that, i actually liked ur story. :D
grossasstoenails chapter 12 . 8/9/2011
it's been a while... but this chapter was good!
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