Reviews for The Inspectorate for Elfish Labour Conditions
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2020
This is so beautifully written, I’m actually crying lol already turned into one of my favorite fics
ScienceMama chapter 12 . 7/29/2020
Loved this fic so much! Romantic tension is hard for me but their happiness when they finally got together was so wonderful and enjoyable to read. Thank you!
ScienceMama chapter 11 . 7/29/2020
This is so wonderful, I’m crying! Lovely!
ScienceMama chapter 8 . 7/29/2020
This is so heartbreaking :(
Puzzler54 chapter 12 . 7/19/2020
Aww sweet epilogue.
Puzzler54 chapter 11 . 7/19/2020
Wow what a chapter! I didn't think it was necessary for them to sleep together when they had only just come together, but a lovely story.
They're so sweet at Hogwarts. I love the potions they do.
No words adequately describe the chapter ending, wow. Wonderful. What timing Malfoy.
Thank you for sharing your writing with us.
Puzzler54 chapter 10 . 7/19/2020
Oh no! Draco where has your confidence gone? Hermione was clearly responding to you before the interruption! And Hermione, honestly, you're a Gryffindor! You know what Draco was doing and he said he missed you - go get him!
Oh dear, the fear of rejection and assumption of unspoken words. I'm glad Draco at least opened up the patronus door again.

Loving this story. It's brilliant.
Puzzler54 chapter 9 . 7/19/2020
Finally, phew I was getting worried how things would change. Clever Squeaky! Although so sad about his hands! Aww!
Very exciting to read the intimate moment, wow they are so natural together. I can't wait to find out what Draco's plans are.
Puzzler54 chapter 7 . 7/19/2020
Yay a way to communicate! Well done Draco! Intrigued to find out what he said to her. Loving this story!
Puzzler54 chapter 6 . 7/19/2020
I love the portrait conversation. He needed some encouragement.
Aww poor Draco - come on Hermione, get in touch! The least you can do is thank Draco for his help and kindness.
Puzzler54 chapter 3 . 7/18/2020
Stumbled across this story. I don't usually enjoy flashbacks in stories more than once but I'm really enjoying how you've written this. And that their friendship takes time to form, much more natural in the hesitancy and careful consideration over what words to say. You write so clearly I feel as if I'm literally following Hermione around!

I like Malfoy's guarded care, and the patronus idea. Great way to get them together for a reason.
Edtin07 chapter 12 . 5/29/2020
Hi, I put your story into my favorite months ago but I realized that I haven't put any review on it. I've been reading your story again and again so many times, just read any chapter then comeback again. It's so inspiring in a way that redemption and forgiveness are beautiful and that everyone deserves a new start. You also did a great job in portraying Draco and Hermione as original as they are in the book with beautiful twist and element of patronus, the slow burn romance between them, all are just beautiful. I wish to see you write more of Dramione stories, but no pressure given. I just want to say that I enjoy and appreciate your work and wish you all best. Thank you!
SpaceKace chapter 12 . 5/10/2020
Awww! This was a beautiful epilogue! I love that their daughter was sorted into Ravenclaw. And I really appreciated McGonagall in this story. Very well done! Cheers!
SpaceKace chapter 10 . 5/10/2020
Ah come on you two! You still have a chance for happiness! Don’t give up yet.
SpaceKace chapter 9 . 5/10/2020
I still prefer Draco’s POV. But Hermione’s is good to read her motivations! Poor Astoria is getting kicked to the curb in this one. Clever clever Squeaky! Give that elf a raise!
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