| Reviews for The Inspectorate for Elfish Labour Conditions |
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   Snowe chapter 6 . 7/10/2011 Wow, the poor boy has it bad. |
| Snowe chapter 5 . 7/10/2011 Narcissa knows about his crush! |
| Snowe chapter 4 . 7/10/2011 Beautiful goodbyes in this chapter, at Hogwarts and in the present. |
| Snowe chapter 3 . 7/10/2011 Loved the patronus scene. And, Hermione obviously has unresolved feelings about Draco-I wonder what else happened between them? |
| Snowe chapter 2 . 7/10/2011 The Hogwarts flashbacks are wonderful-just the right tone. The patronus moment was quite sweet. |
| Snowe chapter 1 . 7/10/2011 Great first chapter! The story is introduced clearly without too much exposition |
| berrykool chapter 10 . 7/10/2011 this story is soo wonderful. i am soo glad i red it because it has been such an exciting story to read! |
| RedLil chapter 9 . 6/21/2011 This is good :) I like how u took ur time in developing the relationship between the two. |
| Thorn Dream chapter 9 . 6/11/2011 Oh I miss this story! It's been a long time... And they kissed! Well, not a romantic one I guess but it's perfect for this time. It feels realistic. And I hope they could be together soon, and the engagement will make that a little hard to do so. Oh! I hope you'll update asap. Until then... ;) |
| flambemyheart chapter 9 . 6/6/2011 I just wanted to say... You're kinda brilliant. This is really good writing - the characters are well done, with the aftereffects of war still ravaging their minds... Sorry, you just reminded me of how bad the Epilogue was. Compared to this... it was bloody awful. Congratulations on such a wonderful gift. |
| DragonGrin - former TeenTypist chapter 9 . 6/6/2011 It's three a.m., I'll backtrack and leave proper reviews later, but in the meantime I wanted to say I'm very impressed with this story and feel like you've done a fantastic job with it. |
| DragonGrin - former TeenTypist chapter 1 . 6/6/2011 I'm certainly impressed with this. It appears you're off to a great start. I like that you included Harry's concern for the Malfoy family, that Hermione may be asking too much on a family that doesn't have much left to lose... |
| Analaa chapter 9 . 6/5/2011 yay they meet again, thanks to Slumpy :) Update soon! |
| cheygrl94 chapter 9 . 6/5/2011 Great Chapter! I like having Hermione's POV back. I've missed her, so to speak. Slumpy's attempts were very believable. I love the way you show how much he cares for Draco in just the looks, and signs, its almost like an extra dialog running behind the scenes. Can't wait for the next chapter. -Chey |
| semantics chapter 9 . 6/5/2011 genius; my heart kept skipping so many beats; slumpy's actions are so clever, I like the details and the little actions such as when Draco gave Hermione his muggle book - that's so sweet. I really miss this story, and I eagerly await the next chapter. It would be nice if the picture of 'The Corridor' exists, lol My apologies, half the time I was squeeling like a schoolgirl. |