Reviews for The Inspectorate for Elfish Labour Conditions
alina290 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
Starting to read your story. I hope I am in for a good ride. I enjoy those.

Liz
jam chapter 7 . 4/18/2011
another lovely chapter! this chapter made me feel especially sorry for draco but especially excited for what is to come between him and hermione! please continue asap! 3
Thorn Dream chapter 7 . 4/18/2011
Yes, if they had a dance at the ball, I think it'll be quite unreal. Because they still apart from each other. *sigh*

And wouldn't it be amazing if they contact each other by patronous? It'll be...somehow romantic I guess... I wonder if Draco ever realize his feeling towards Hermione. Btw, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update!
cheygrl94 chapter 7 . 4/17/2011
AWESOME chapter. I really like the way you set up the backdrop for his training. It created a beautiful image. Lucious' reaction seemed realistic, and so very HIM. I like that your sticking so close to cannon, but I'm sort of hoping the end result will be little different than the epilogue :D. Can't wait for the next chapter.

-Chey
Lissie1019 chapter 7 . 4/17/2011
A very interesting and well-written story. I look forward to your next update.
Lady-Crymsyn chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
great fic :)
sushiking chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
Oh I seriously love the part where Draco informed Lucius that he can cast the patronus. And I like that Lucius wanted to see it. I wished he'd be more proud of his son instead of the mockery and forlorn expression though.

God. I really love reading this story from Draco's point of view. Mostly because I'm curious of the Malfoys' life after the war. (I'm a huge fan of Lucius and Narcissa) And I'm so intrigued on why Draco insisted the elf to keep it a secret about the patronus. Does it means that the Death Eaters never actually know that patronus can also be a message deliver? If so, does this mean he actually doesn't trust his parents to be repentant enough to share it with them?

Oh and I can't wait for the next chap. I'm missing Hermione. What's she up to after that night? I want Draco and her to see face to face. _
Sophia chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed reading your story. I was hesitant about the Malfoy and Hermione pairing, but I have enjoyed every chapter. I love how you have developed the characters and your style of writing. I cannot wait to read more!
flamelm chapter 7 . 4/16/2011
How beautiful.. I'm generally not a big fan of the whole angst or hurt/comfort genre.. but your story.. it isn't exactly heart wrenching.. gently tugs at the heart instead and makes you feel the way the characters do.. Its simple and human. I'm not a writer and i don't think i'm able to put forth what i feel properly but trust me.. its a good feeling :)

Yes.. they're still miles apart and your taking your own time getting them there.. And for once.. i want to wait patiently till the two of them get together and soak in all the emotions you portray of theirs in the meantime .. good work :)
thegalaxsea chapter 6 . 4/15/2011
Beautiful, just beautiful. I absolutely adore how you've portrayed both Draco and Hermione.
sushiking chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
Oh. Your writing is so beautiful! I love chap 6 very very much. Especially the flashbacks on how Draco can conjure the patronus and the one with the portrait.

Looking forward for the next ones.)
Thorn Dream chapter 6 . 4/12/2011
Yeah! Why she didn't contact Draco...? Is she didn't want to meet him anymore? Or is she just confused?

And its readable; Draco's happy thought, I already knew its Hermione! Its indeed readable but somewhat still sweet and mesmerizing. He could be fall for her in their final year when she taught him patronous charm, but I thought that he didn't realize it or he deny it till he realize it? I bet she'll feel the same! Cause she kissed him! This fic is so real, totally real. It just about their life, their feelings, their surrounding. Till next chapter!
jam chapter 6 . 4/11/2011
another amazing addition to your story, which might I add is so unique in comparison to the other hermione/draco fanfics! this story makes me wish that i had someone like draco in my life and that i was much more like hermione! thank you so much for another lovely chapter and please continue! also, your writing is beautiful to read and flows in such a natural manner! love everything about this story 3
mink tea chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
This has absolutely been one of my favorite Draco/Hermione fanfics.

It's extremely well written, and I think that you portrayed postwar!Draco wonderfully. It was exactly as I had seen him as and it really fits in with his character.

You hardly get enough reviews for this when you should have much, much more.

I eagerly wait for your next chapters.
FireTaiga chapter 6 . 4/10/2011
The characted development in Draco is simply brilliant. Very subtle but noticeable at the perfect moments. I am very eagar to read the next chapter. I'm sure it will be fantastic!
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