| Reviews for The Inspectorate for Elfish Labour Conditions |
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   FireTaiga chapter 5 . 4/10/2011 Fantastic again. Love seeing everythign from Draco's point of view. Gives the story a whole new dimension. |
| FireTaiga chapter 4 . 4/7/2011 Gah so good! I love this Fic! Seeing the updates in my eamil always makes me super excited and I ahve to read them the second I get the chance. Can't wait for part two! |
| jam chapter 5 . 4/7/2011 one of the best dr/hr stories i've ever read on fanfiction! read it all in one sitting / PLEASE GOD UPDATE SOON! I'm finding this better than the original ;) 3 |
| Thorn Dream chapter 5 . 4/6/2011 Draco's heart is...unreadable. That's complicated. Can't wait for the re-inspection! Will Hermione come? Oh, yes she will, she must! And, what? Propose Astoria? HELL NO! Don't let him do that! Heaven forbid! Hell forbid! Okay, I'm going crazy right now. Until next chapter! ;) |
| D chapter 5 . 4/5/2011 BOO-YA! Genius, lol "its not surprising the ravenclaws would come back" anyways for something deep and serious, i enjoyed it :) update soon! |
| mermaidgirl45 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011 The Dramione shipping had never made much sense to me. I just couldn't see it. But this is good. Very, very, very good. I absolutely love it. Please write more. I love how you add in Hermione's SPEW campaigning. It makes sense how they meet, and it's realistic, instead of the two randomly bumping into each other. I love how you've done this. It's very pure and it's very honest. I absolutely, simply love it. |
| cheygrl94 chapter 5 . 4/5/2011 Anther great chapter. I'm with you. I like Draco's POV. I like Hermione's too, but Draco seems the more mysterious one, harder to read, so it's nice to just know what's going through his head. I think you really hit the nail on the head with your descriptions of his feelings. I always thought that Draco had another side that was just waiting for the right person to bring it out. I can't wait for more. -Chey |
| sushiking chapter 4 . 3/29/2011 I love chap 4 very very much. Especially the part where Draco's patronus plays with Hermione. ) Looking forward for the next updates. |
| Thorn Dream chapter 4 . 3/29/2011 Wow... I'm glad that Draco ain't stepped back when Hermione kiss him. Their relationship is beyond complicated. And I wonder how could he succeed in his patron form, there must be something isn't it? Update! |
| juventus chapter 4 . 3/28/2011 What I love more of ur story is the feeling to intimacy that it shown when they appear distant between them. I hope u continue w the story :) |
| AngelinaWeasley1 chapter 4 . 3/28/2011 extremely well written. very good premise. |
| High-Functioning Ginger chapter 4 . 3/28/2011 This is really good! I love the past interaction between Hermione and Draco that you're building on. Can't wait to read more! |
| HermioneGranger2020 chapter 4 . 3/27/2011 I absolutely LOVE your story. It is very well written with an interesting and well developed plot. I have no criticisms. Can't wait for more, and to see how Ron will react to Hermione's experience. Eagerly waiting for more so update soon! The last chapter length was great, keep em coming. |
| Nala Moon chapter 4 . 3/27/2011 Awww, poor Hermione and Draco . . . they like each other but dont want to do anything about it (or can't) i cant wait for more and i dont think it will help with her nightmares :/ i just dont think it was enough or atleast it wouldnt have helped me if i was in her position haha. i really like this story i love the flashbacks and all the characters, i hope you update soon. |
| EasilySwayed chapter 4 . 3/26/2011 Very well written chapter and story as a whole. I enjoy the flashbacks and the psychological development of the characters. I can trully see Malfoy and Hermione acting the way they do. Thank you for posting this story and I hope you update soon. |