| Reviews for The Inspectorate for Elfish Labour Conditions |
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   cheygrl94 chapter 4 . 3/26/2011 You are more than welcome. I really liked the fact that Draco's patronus is a ferett. It's fitting. Can't wait for the next update. -chey |
| semantics chapter 4 . 3/26/2011 Yessssssssssssss; I am oh so happy you posted a new chapter! Sigh I appreciate your style with all these bittersweet memories that resurface and the fact Hermione and Draco want each other, but neither of them is directly admitting it... Great work and I look forward to the next chapter. :D |
| semantics chapter 3 . 3/22/2011 This story is really good and tension is building up :D |
| Thorn Dream chapter 3 . 3/21/2011 I like you writing style, and the story seem so interesting yet complicated. But I still don't get it, what had happened to them back in Hogwarts? Are they had something...special before? You know, my heart just sank when Draco said that he's seeing for Astoria... Is Hermione married with Ron? Oh, its so confusing... Update soon. :) |
| sushiking chapter 3 . 3/21/2011 Oh hun, your story is lovely! and I really love your style of writing. Very beautiful. And I also love the premise of this story. Very refreshing. I'm so looking forward for the next chap. |
| cathymalfoy chapter 3 . 3/20/2011 Once again, wonderful work! I love the connections you make between past and present, and the attention to detail. Draco's portrayed so nicely! |
| cheygrl94 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 Yet another GREAT chapter. Again your voice is so strong. I feel like the characters have not only been made your own, but that they are developing before my eyes. I'm very interested to see what will happen in the drawing room, and I can't wait for more. -Chey |
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/20/2011 This story is much better than others I have read. I feel like they fit the characters in the actual series. |
| FireTaiga chapter 3 . 3/19/2011 Another fantastic chapter. I can't wait for the next update! |
| FireTaiga chapter 2 . 3/19/2011 Loving this so far! The sections are very well written and have just the right amount of detail to be interesting without bothersome. Very well done. |
| lilac9109 chapter 2 . 3/16/2011 I was very excited when I received an alert for a dramione (I originally found you through Fall of the White Lotus) and I really enjoyed reading this chapter. The way you transition between present and past flows very well and in just the second chapter I can see the premise without you coming right out and saying they went back for eighth year or something of that kind. I absolutely love your writing style. It is very hard to find stories that are written well, much less have you hooked right from the beginning. |
| thegalaxsea chapter 2 . 3/16/2011 To say the least, your writing style has got me hooked. It flows nicely and I adore the way the story changes from present to past and back again. Also I'm anticipating the next chapter to figure out this intriguing history between Draco and Hermione. Thanks for writing something special. |
| cathymalfoy chapter 2 . 3/15/2011 The use of past and present timelines and the convergence of details in them is very nice. It definitely keeps things interesting! Keep writing! This is wonderful. |
| cheygrl94 chapter 2 . 3/15/2011 Amazing work. I really love your voice. I don't generally like Dramione fics, but this one seems to have gotten off to a great start. Can't wait for more. |
| messy-hair-day chapter 2 . 3/15/2011 This sounds really interestng, I cant wait to find out about the history between Hermione and Draco. Please update soon. |