Reviews for Waiting
pistonsfan75 chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Wow! I really liked this. I'm surprised I didn't find this before now, considering it's over five years old.
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Great story!
sydney chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
it was so sweet until you put in the smut
hawkeyeforever chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Beautiful and sweet! Happy Writing:)
Purple Majestic chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
this was nicely written!
LovelyToMeetYou chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Beautifully written and excellent characterization, this story is definitely one of my favorites from the movie.
siobhan.22 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Good story
Dr34ming chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
That was beautifully written! Absolutely gorgeous. Shang was so unsure, and so romantic. This really appeals to the hopeless romantic in me ;)
xXxhurting-insidexXx chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Awwwwwwwwwh :') .. Absolutely Adorable :))
Sunny writes love chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
I absolutely loved this! please write more.. pleeassee?
Reader427 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011

Interesting. I like your writing. You really go right to the emotion of moments. Make your reader consider some of the what ifs (of which there are many in the Mulan story).

The beginning of the story is a touch blurry. Did he really go all the way to her house and then think to himself 'What the hell am I doing here?', walk away and come back? Would it really take him hours to make up his mind on that? If he did in fact choose Mulan after hours of deliberation it strikes me as kind of weird. He knows hardly anything of the woman Mulan, he still has so much to figure out...Things he would better figure out by spending time with her than being away...

Actually kind of reminds me of the Pride and Prejudice movie with Kiera Knightly. Maybe we are supposed to just fall ardently in love with someone based on brief encounters and go with it.

Just my thoughts.