Reviews for Downfall
moosejuice5 chapter 4 . 2/13/2015
This was interesting, id love to read more if you ever update it
Galeiam chapter 4 . 8/4/2014
thought I'm not happy to see Allie Sue i guess i can deal with it to see ho the sequel goes...
all forms of fluff chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Fucken awsome, now on to The Alchemists Quest. I do hope that has a sequle as well.
GeorgeTobor chapter 4 . 7/7/2012
Betrayal, again...

When the paradox unmade time then the Norns Urd, Belldandy, and Skuld took control, reforming the tapestry but without wanded magic. Thus our world was born.

Take that Tom!

I like my ending better.
GeorgeTobor chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
JKR made Tom powerful.
Then she made Harry weak.

I hope each penny she has earned is a bad penny.

CRUCIO!

(watches JKR scream)

What? JKR is a dark whore for the way she treated Harry and the rest.
Separ chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
Great story, now let's see how Allie does in the past ...
FF-loverHP1 chapter 4 . 2/27/2012
amazing concept cant wait for chapter 5. i love the end scene of chapter 4 with the fates and the ferryman
Penny is wise chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
Interesting story.
ironhair chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
Didn't quite get Allie's actions ... her betrayal nor what she did after that...
ironhair chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
wow.
Europec chapter 4 . 11/13/2011
So you think you can Ferry the immortal Harry Potter across the river? We shall see.

Excellent! Cheers!
Shedao chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
You had a good thing going here, but it feel victim to two major flaws.

Firstly, it had the potential to be epic, but you cut it short. Draw it out, flesh out the backstory, expound on events and characters, and it would have been great.

Secondly, it was bloody confusing. your theory and plot elements weren't explained really well, don't get me started on your ending...

However, all in all I still liked this story.
Le hussard chapter 4 . 9/2/2011
Really interesting and well-thought. Are the final characters a reference to Gaiman's Endless?
madsloth chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
So somehow they are able to send his soul back in time and alter events and make people go to a place to meet Harry? he will be possessing himself but why? from what I am seeing he is not going to remember anything it is like they think having Hanna at the Zoo so she can inform Harry he is a wizard will change the fact that Voldemort is seemingly indestructible and he was a lazy student. Harry meeting Someone is not going to clue them in to the fact that Voldemort is going to resurrect, hunt down the royals to unlock unfathomable power and mayhem, expose the wizarding world or even let them know he has Horcruxes. I don't see how any meaningful change could be made without him retaining his memories. hell if you can't send back memories but just make a few changes why not Give Harry the same drive to excel in magic that Dumbledore and Tom possessed while at school.
Harriverse chapter 4 . 6/19/2011
This was a very deep, philosophical story. It made me think. You left it open to many interpretations...too many for me to be satisfied of an outcome. From the ending in the room, I'm leaning more towards an unfavorable one, so it leaves me a little creeped out.
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