Reviews for Altered States
Slyver Thief chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
this is really really good! XD
cb chapter 27 . 7/4/2011
good job!
HanaChan chapter 27 . 7/3/2011
Absolutely wonderful.

It catered to the intellectual in me.

It catered to the side of me that enjoys humor.

It catered to the part of me that enjoys a big ol' lemon.

I found myself enraptured on more than one occasion; found myself laughing aloud at several instances.

Well written and very interesting A
scillian chapter 27 . 7/3/2011
I don't really know how to start this review.

There are some aspects I truly liked in this story, like the soul searching process that accompanies the experiment, some really deeply funny moments with Neji and Kiba, the hypnosis which was in my opinion very well described, and the overall tune of the story which was very agreeable to read.

On the other side, I feel like their relationship evolves in a way that makes me a bit uneasy, sometimes too slowly, and then a bit too fast. It sometimes creates an uneven rhythm.

But you have in this story two really perfect moments, that translate what I think about the gay identity and the way of being in such a relationship so perfectly that I have to say how much, ultimately, I liked it, because you raise some important questions and you manage to find great answer and to write it amazingly.
Aislinnqueen chapter 20 . 7/2/2011
Wow, that was amazing. But it doesn't seem finished! PLEASE write more!
amuto45 chapter 27 . 7/1/2011
loved it so much but i;m not satisfied with the ending..please do more
PErfgon chapter 19 . 7/1/2011
omg just reading this chaoter was so...lol lol awkward! Lol your so blunt in ur writing...gosh i was like blushing the whole fricking chapter gggaahhh good chapter tho
Sir.Demetri chapter 27 . 7/1/2011
Pairings/relationships-7/10

Plot- 9.8/10

Character Dev.- 10/10

Sexual Cont.- 10/10

Loved it, only suggestion i would give you is that maybe you could develop other relationships/pairings (aside from your main characters relationship). It could make the plot more interesting not that wasn't.

Write more okay cause you could become my new favourite drug.
RememberingAzareth chapter 27 . 7/1/2011
Hey! Long time no review, ne? That was a wonderful ending to a truly amazing fic. (: I'm glad I stuck with you through it all, it was a really fun ride. I even learned something about porn. XD Ah well. You know how it goes, learn something new each day. C: Anyway, congrats on finishing the fic and hope everything in life goes well for you.
666snoopy chapter 27 . 6/29/2011
I loved the story, great job!
xXPierceMyHeartxX chapter 27 . 6/29/2011
hot as hell!
sfqueeny chapter 27 . 6/28/2011
Plz don't tell me this story is over. You can't just end it like that. No no no plzzz. I love this fanfic it's amazing. What happen when naruto. And sasuke mother out and about the town. Please don't end it or at least nit like that. :'(
sfqueeny chapter 27 . 6/28/2011
Plz don't tell me this story is over. You can't just end it like that. No no no plzzz. I love this fanfic it's amazing. What happen when naruto. And sasuke mother out and about the town. Please don't end it or at least nit like that. :'(
Kurinka chapter 27 . 6/28/2011
Excuse whilst being ever so slightly head over heels in love with this story *bows to the genius*

I loved every chapter and your writing style was really skilled. One of the best fics out there in my opinion -
slime chan chapter 27 . 6/28/2011
You're a genius and I love you. /flees to draw fanart
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