|Reviews for Magic, as opposed to Magic|
| MacDii chapter 29 . 3/6
I like this story :c interesting premise and a unique style, characterisation is good, and I find myself disliking douche!Dumbledore. Plus I love wordbuilding. (Tamriel is a mess!)
Keep on writing,
| oOKamiOo chapter 29 . 2/21
This is fic is gold. The only thing that I can advise you is this. Fanfiction that has lots of view have a couple of things in common. First is its well researched which yours have. Second its well written. Which this fic has as well. Lastly almost all of them qverage 10,000 words per chapter now this one is abit optional but you might wanna consider it. Some peeps are afraid of lots of chapters while some actually sort word count. But hey continue with what your doing its going well anyways.
| JPElles chapter 29 . 2/17
Interesting story as usual. Keep it up.
| I Judicator chapter 29 . 2/16
Ohhhhh I can't wait for Voldy's soul to be soul trapped in some horrible way for him!
| Opinr chapter 29 . 2/14
A very fun story so far I look forward to more.
| languid reader chapter 29 . 2/14
i can't help but think you might eventually write yourself into a corner with this one or bog down your story too much.
| n chapter 29 . 2/14
| languidreader chapter 9 . 2/14
a good story so far. though i'm hoping that the last part of this chapter was more of an omake than part of your story. (i'll treat it as one for now anyway.) i despise invisible godly commentators/machinators/what-have-yous.
| Eipok chapter 29 . 2/15
Corpse-humping wood-elf? Did I miss something? Ra'jirra's aide is a necrophilic Bosmer? Wait... I think I vaguely remember him from Oblivion, but wasn't that some side-quest? Don't make me play Oblivion again... That game has not aged well.
| bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 29 . 2/14
| PuppyBeBad chapter 29 . 2/13
Interesting I look forward to seeing what's next. The Arch mage trading for human technology in exchange for bringing wizards together with muggles... sounds like a great feat hope he's up to it. Both muggles and wizards would benefit greatly from an alliance.
I like this story but there are a few things, if you're willing to hear it but keep in mind I like this story very much. The Elder scrolls series takes place on Nirn, not Earth-2, which is an alien planet. How humans got there I don't know and could be a fun thing to explore as a fic writer. Maybe some group of desperate wizards and witches used powerful magic to open a portal to another world and escaped the witch hunts that way? (you can use that if you like) Personally I would have tried to keep it as true to canon as possible (well still adding my own twist) and kept them aliens not break the fourth wall and acknowledge it as a videogame. That's just me and your approach is interesting.
| Shieldage chapter 29 . 2/13
Sweet special effects from the diary. Quite fun to have magical America connect with the wasteland. Hmm... Flipped through the story trying to find info... I know the Capital Wasteland portal in the complex Ra'jirra set up was stable and permanently open, as of the most recent chapter in that story. I'm assuming the Shrieking Shack portal is permanently open as well? Not sure what would happen to the Horcrux if it was shoved into a completely separate dimension and all the portals leading back to it's homeworld were severed... Then again there might not actually be any consequences for that, beyond it not counting towards Voldemort's total next time he's in need of a body...
Hope Malfoy heals properly now that he's separated himself from that diary.
I love Ra'jirra and his family :) Very well-assembled characters
| Selias chapter 29 . 2/13
Grindlewald was from Durmstrang.
| kffs chapter 29 . 2/13
Thanks for writing
| Sora with an S chapter 29 . 2/13
That is going to be weird... Americans in America. Culture clash? Culture fusion? Interesting either way.