|Reviews for Magic, as opposed to Magic|
| renextronex chapter 26 . 7/10
I really don't like how Ra'jirra and Harry talk about the TES world like taking for granted that people are understanding
| renextronex chapter 9 . 7/10
percy head oy this year? no, nop, percy was head boy in year 3
| Arktyranus chapter 15 . 6/30
One of the best stories I've read in a long while. Maybe eventually do a fanfiction with a Tamrielic mage teaching the history of Tamrielic as a replacement of Harry's divination class. If you want, of course. Now, I miss you farewell, my liege.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 39 . 5/11
so, i have to ask, partly because you said not too. i want more. MORE!
also, when, exactly, did Harry get Hedwig?
and i want to see Harry take the throne of Cyrodil, since more or less outright stated that he was Dragonborn. and the Last Dragonborn won't be around for another couple centuries, and the Neverine, the only other known Dragonborn wandered off too Akavir years ago. even if it's as a more or less useless figurehead, like in the UK.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 34 . 5/11
why exactly would he be all that worried about being Meridia's favored? Daedra worship isn't exactly a new concept to the Khajit. just ask Azura.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 19 . 5/10
honestly, i kind of dislike your Ra'Jirra. he let Earnest Haines basically commit suicide for absolutely no reason other than he missed his daddy, other than, oh, i don't know, inviting him back to tamriel with him, if he was so worried about the guy being lonely in DC.
and now, you have him making preparations to basically abandon his son if he winds up killed, basically cutting him off from the only family he's ever known for the nebulous safety of the wizarding world. something worthy of the grand old bastard of the HP world himself, Dumbledore.
| AnthonyR89 chapter 11 . 5/10
...Lee Jordan was in the same year as the Twins. i think you meant Dean Thomas, who's also black.
| Rune Tobor chapter 1 . 2/7
Arrogant Albus Dumbledore needs to have his head examined.
Preferably after it has been removed from his body.
Don't worry, it's for the Greater Good!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
This is completely fucking shit in so many ways the writer deserves to die
| floatingmangocake chapter 39 . 1/2
Well, thank you for writing. An enjoyable story.
| floatingmangocake chapter 13 . 1/2
Would be great if people were more knowledgeable of the world in TES, they've probably forgotten they've got cities on the rotting corpse-moons. Mananauts vs Astronauts might've been an interesting conversation. Oh well, such is the way of TES. Liking things so far.
| AlekTas chapter 6 . 8/18/2016
There is no reason for him to hate the word muggle. It means someone easily beguiled. How does this translate to something the arch mage from a world not their own would hate? For all he knows they might be.
| NouvelleVoix chapter 11 . 7/4/2016
You've changed a large number of rather random things. Pansy as a muggleborn? Why?
| sithis chapter 3 . 6/11/2016
too much cussing needs to be rated m
| Phant0m5 chapter 17 . 3/30/2016
... No. The wand is a tool that can be used as a weapon, just like any other tool in the world. A knife or dagger, on the other hand, has only one use- cutting things. If you aren't in the kitchen, potions lab, or warehouse, a knife is a weapon at all times and never a tool. Therefore, you DO confiscate the dedicated weapon, and do NOT confiscate the tool. Particularly not the tool that is required for literally every class in the school.
Also? Using magic as a weapon in the HP world requires knowing how to do it, plus practice in using those weaponized spells. It's only a weapon when you intentionally make it into one. Again, a knife is ALWAYS a weapon; a single stabbing action, even accidentally like if you fall while holding the knife, can maim or kill.
This isn't even a hard concept to understand. It's extremely basic logic. To have gone out of your way to point out how wands aren't considered weapons by magical society, you must be specifically looking for things to throw at the HP 'verse to make it look bad. Which, given the content of all previous chapters, actually fits. The whole fic so far can be summed up as: HP wizard says something, gets verbal beat down on bad logic (which is okay, if a bit over-done)... defends bad logic like a good little straw-man robot. What the hell. This is... astoundingly biased.
Not sure if the rest is worth reading. We'll see I suppose.