Reviews for The Ritual
Abicion chapter 4 . 4/10/2011
I think "Banana-chan takes over the world" is a completely valid plot. Yeah, it's not very innovative, but it's a plot.
The Pairing Guy chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
Huh. This is a standard PWP story: Girl gets possessed, causing her to have sex with people of every species and gender. Only there's no actual smut! Why go through all the Without Plot part if there's not going to be any Pornn?
Abicion chapter 4 . 3/21/2011
The plot was actually derived from Beowulf, Excalibur, and Rebuild of Evangelion 2.0

Not really sure how that last one wound up in there, but yeah.
Martin III chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
Ah, I see; my first review caught you in the middle of uploading chapters.

Not much to say for this story. The plot seems devised for a pornographic work: Females of the cast drink mind-altering potion which makes them engage in sexual activities with multiple members of both sexes, fic ends with no resolution. Only there's no explicit sexual content. I'm not saying it would be a good fic if there **were** - on the contrary. It's just that if the purpose of this plot isn't gratuitous pornog, then I'm at a loss as to what it is.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
Ah, I see; my first review caught you in the middle of uploading chapters.

Not much to say for this story. The plot seems devised for a pornographic work: Females of the cast drink mind-altering potion which makes them engage in sexual activities with multiple members of both sexes, fic ends with no resolution. Only there's no explicit sexual content. I'm not saying it would be a good fic if there **were** - on the contrary. It's just that if the purpose of this plot isn't gratuitous pornog, then I'm at a loss as to what it is.
Martin III chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
The mysterious underground spring(and its eventual effect on Kureha) makes a good enough basis for a fic. Not amazing, of course, but for straightforward adventure it works. The writing isn't bad, either, though there are a lot of needless adverbs.

Very odd place to end the story, though. Some sort of resolution would have been appropriate.