Reviews for A Day at The Beach
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
please get a beta. other than that, it's good
IDreamedADance chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Very cute, I do like the plot, but if you're going to write more (and I hope you will) pleaaaase please please please send this through an editor, or some other form of spell check. All the bad spelling and typos make this very hard to read.
DemiTheSinger chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I LOVE this. Write more plz. :3