Reviews for Destiny or Fate
slytherinsal chapter 3 . 3/20/2011
I had been going to suggest that you would have more exposure in the well established David Eddings category rather than in a lone category already covered; but actually I'm so far puzzled as to what this story has to do with the world of the Belgariad/Mallorean. it has some interesting ideas in it but as it leaps around rather is a little hard to read as there are no links between themes. i'm not sure what category it should be in but with revision to have better and more comprehensible segues could be a good story in whatever world it should be in. If it is meant to be in David Eddings' foremost universe i would suggest you make that clear somewhere in the first chapter with some recognisable reference or add an author's note that all will become clear in the future.