Reviews for The Siege of The Pyramid
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Goth can't read! So funny! Good story, nice moral.
silver snowdrop 363 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
I loved the humor at the beginning LOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL...So funny... Check your grammar and spelling though, you have quite a few mistakes...Good humor and funny story overall.