|Reviews for As You Like It|
| slytherinsal chapter 2 . 3/24/2011
this is moving along very nicely... and that raises a LOT of questions about Ryiah...
I love your simple but effective clothes descriptions; dusty rose and grey; so pretty and dainty, so Porenn! doubtless with a subtle trim of silver; i can see it.
Belderan had all that dryad in her...Ihope she isn't going to lose that dryad little temper and spread spiteful things about Ryiah
| slytherinsal chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
an excellent start!
I think about two thirds of the way down there's a word or several missing because the sense is not quite clear:
"How's the 'Thieving' going?" The both of them laugh and then sit down to talk to each other about how the Khaeran will be accompanying Kheva to Riva on a business trip. Khaeran shrugs and tells her that she is welcome, as long as she doesn't steal too much from the Rivan people.
'the Khaeran' feels as though there's something missing between the two words...
otherwise very intriguing and of course anything about Drasnians jerks my strings! looking forward to more.