|Reviews for The Fox and the Maiden|
| anlmoon chapter 1 . 3/4
| jojo07 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Gah! Too cute! Thanks! Needed this so much!
| ElaCharm chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Wait, did Sakura and Sasuke know that the Storyteller was Naruto?
And if they did, did they know that the couple was Hinata and Naruto?
I am so confused...!D
| YumeKioko chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
It was good but you need to go back over it and edit it some more. For example you use the words lightly and slightly to much and some of your sentences look as if yor brain was moving faster than your hands. Othere than that beutiful story. Oh' and one last thing I thought Naruto left Hinata so how did she find him? And how did she become blind? The last question doesn't really matter to your story at all I was just wondering. Keep on writing and I hope to see more of you.
| hiNAru Aburame chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
... really, really cute...
| Christopher Scott chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Great job. It was well-written and very , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief
| oceanmoon chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Awwww, I like that this story has a happy ending!
| Number1Weirdo chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Awww, she loved him even though he was a demon, and he left to protect her! How tragic and romantic. And they meet again! :) Awesome story!
| YaoiFanGirl1990 chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
You did a very wonderful jon on the story _ I remember you showing me the song love your detail!