Reviews for This Is the Last Time I Will Fall
toeki chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
very good story, you are able to show his confusion and pain very well
ardx chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Shaun could catch him, or he could land on a person and kill them? There are endless random stupid possibilities, but dying sounds like the most thoughtful one. Awesome story, I love it
Kitera chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
I see your Shaun/Desmond story floating here. It was very good as usual. I really felt bad for Desmond with the Bleeding effect. Everything got so screwed up I see.
Rainel chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Beautiful darling. You really managed to grasp the confusion, the panic, the emotion of losing one's self.