Reviews for Flaming Moon
kenin from india chapter 19 . 4/22/2015
the baby bella is carrying is a moon pool .to deliver the baby u need to tear the stomach with teeth.
aurorabeauty chapter 32 . 6/5/2014
PLEASE! You have to continue! This is amazing and I can't just be left hanging!
katnissandpeetaaretoocute chapter 32 . 3/19/2014
This story is amazing, I love the storyline so much and by the way your writing is perfect!
Guest chapter 32 . 11/23/2013
Are you still writing or is that a really long weekend?
amaya chapter 32 . 6/5/2013
where's the new chapter iam diying to read it please.
ivone chapter 32 . 1/27/2013
I love ur story its amazing. please continue writing more
Estrella123 chapter 32 . 1/12/2013
So, I really like your story. I'm a huge fan of Nessie growing up stories. I do have some suggestions of the things I'd like to see happening. And even though Nessie is the main focus of the story, I'd really like something about Emmie growing up. Nessie goes through such things in the beginning of the book, but with Emmie such things kind of fall away. I think that for her the growing up stuff and everything is very significant as to her personal story. I'd like to hear everything about Ivee's growing up too. I know it will be very repeated then, but with Ness everything was over so quickly, too. But, as they are all hybrids, there might be a lot of difference between them, since they are all unique. And I think Alice, Rosalie and Bella would worry about their little daughters too, especially about things like that. Maybe some scene of them talking together and Bella kind of telling her experience with Nessie, and they discussing how everything can turn out for each individual girl? And if they need it, they can of course always talk to Carlisle about some things too. Because no one knows what will happen to Ness when she reaches maturity, and if she will be all frozen too. And I think that the girls would talk to each other about growing up stuff too, mostly Ness and Emmie. Because Emmie herself might be very worried about some things too. And later, when Ivee is older, they might have all three of them kind of heart-to-hearts about being hybrids and growing up so fast.
amaya chapter 32 . 1/9/2013
i love it its wonderful please continu .i'll die to know what will happen next.
EBRAJERCECullen 130 chapter 32 . 11/29/2012
Loved it! Wrote more soon!
alesh chapter 32 . 11/24/2012
plz continue the story... it would be nice to see some rommelxnova but plz go on a slow pace... it is still hard to visualize them as 5 year old in one chapter and as a preteen in next few chapters... nice outline by the way
Kim chapter 32 . 11/10/2012
Update please
CarlyCox chapter 32 . 8/5/2012
Continue this story please! I love it!
CarlyCox chapter 19 . 8/5/2012
I thought it was Salem Massachusetts? Ehhh o well
CarlyCox chapter 3 . 8/5/2012
I love it so far!
Anne Shirley Cullen chapter 32 . 7/21/2012
I so love it hope you get the next chapter up soon.
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