|Reviews for Ineffable|
| feebes86 chapter 6 . 11/27/2011
I've just convinced my kids that I am totally heartless... the spontaneous shouts of laughter followed by my snorts and gasps for air all while they were watching Travis kill Ole Yeller confused them...
This was fantastic...
I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
| Tara Maria chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Charlie and Billy are to funny. Love it.. :)
| Mrstrentreznor chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
secrets and lies... problems, problems...
i could imagine Charlie spying and lip reading...
| Mrstrentreznor chapter 5 . 11/26/2011
my brother used to torture my Cindy doll; warm up her limbs so they would bend ... i'm a little concerned about Charlie hog tying cabbage patch dolls.
I really think quil would be half okay if jake would just get out of the way... he usually make sit worse
| It's a Jacob Thing chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
| Princess Mishawaka chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Very informative chapter. I was thrilled to know about mimes who do drug deals and cartoon characters that was really a good thing to know in case I run across any...Charlie and his ways to spy on Bella also was right up front with all the information anyone would need to watch the neighborhood and teenaged daughter
Billy really tried to get out of telling Charlie anything and I really enjoyed the stories of the two of them making Harry tell stories and dance naked. Charlie can't get Quill's name right just like he never got Edward's name right. Glad you wrote this chapter you made my day and whole weekend. So funny...
| i.luv.twilight2 chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
If only Charlie in the movie were as insightful and observant as your version, things would be much more complicated. I love the relationship between Billy and the Chief. Hilarious!
| i'm in the looney bin chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
LOved it Charlie is hilarious! But no Quil :( can't wait for more
Not hols yet tho :( dam :P x
| enchantressinblack chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Charlie and Billy are always up to something! lol The druggy mime visual was so funny I nearly peed myself! lol as always well done my friend!
| Reign77 chapter 6 . 11/26/2011
Hilarious! Love Charlie in this. update soon
| dorme99 chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
Great chapter! Billy and Charlie are so funny
| UKJ chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
I think I feel sorry for Bella, with an overprotective dad, who can interegate suspekts and read lips. How is a teenage girl suppose to have secrets?
But It's funny to read how scared Jake is from him(Charlie I mean), and how he messes with them.
| sweetdreams1 chapter 6 . 11/25/2011
Merriment aside...Charlie is one seriously sharp Cop. LOL
Charlie and Billy together are priceless. It's just a shame that Bella isn't J's imprint...because of the endless antics they would put Jacob through.
It would all but send me over the edge of sanity with laughter.
Charlie's names for Quil just keep mounting. Hahhahaha
Now we have Kwee, Qore, Qont, Quaker (my personal fav) and Qually. *snort*
| tabbialice chapter 5 . 11/25/2011
Your story is so fuckawesome! Hilarious! More PLEASE!
| ifelloffmaadinosaaur chapter 5 . 11/24/2011
i laughed so fuckin hard! thanks i needed that (: (x