Reviews for The Maiden
rebecca's mom chapter 16 . 5/22/2022
I truly loved your story! I will miss your characters. Thank you XO
Heather Y chapter 15 . 3/26/2022
So sad to see this end so soon, loved this story from the beginning.
Heather Y chapter 14 . 3/26/2022
So it finally happened and look who it at the door!
Heather Y chapter 10 . 3/26/2022
So good, I cried and really felt the emotions in this chapter. Yay the kiss topped it off.
Heather Y chapter 7 . 3/25/2022
Love how Kate is messing with Edward, too funny.
Heather Y chapter 6 . 3/25/2022
So sad but it has to happen if they are going to be able to be together.
Heather Y chapter 5 . 3/25/2022
What a sad story about his sister, but she will now on through baby. I think Kate is picking up on something for sure.
Heather Y chapter 4 . 3/25/2022
I'm sure if Little Wolf could for he would, it's sad she is feeling so abandoned. Edward's possessive side is coming out and he can't act on anything yet.
Heather Y chapter 3 . 3/25/2022
I'm enjoying Vella and Kate's friendship. It's so lonely out there and to be pregnant on top of it.
Heather Y chapter 2 . 3/24/2022
It’s happening and there is stopping it!
Heather Y chapter 1 . 3/24/2022
I usually don't comment until I'm through with a story, but they are all so good! Great first chapter and I'm already hooked. Dancing with Wolves is on my favorite, so I'm thrilled about this one.
Serena62 chapter 13 . 10/26/2021
Omg you’ve got me on this chapter, I’ve gone through a number of tissues now lol

Great story, so sad for Kate but I loved that she met up with Garrett. Can’t wait to see what happens with Edward and Bella, does Little Wolf come back? Eek!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/22/2019
I feel like Bella was the second choice...the rebound.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/22/2019
This story was gross. I don't mean your writing, just the plot.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/22/2019
Bella deserves better than Kate's leftovers. I'm not a Jacob fan, but he would have been a better option.
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