Reviews for Torn
xxxHalloxxx chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
I was scrolling down my list just now and saw 2 stories with the same title, summary, & amt of words. There was this one and the other. Idk if your work was copyrighted, or if this one is the copyright, but I just thought you should know.
moniquecullen chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
What the...? No he didn't. Is there going to be a continuation of this story? I would love to read it if so.
TKegl chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Ahhhhhh! Oh no! I certainly hope you're going to continue this after the contest!

Really well done - good luck in the contest!
KimmiCullen chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
omg omg omg, I flipped when Edward asked for coffee but then did a double flip when she saw James...I need to know what comes next, does Edward call security or just punch him 1st out of instincts and anger protecting Bella...Please write at least 1 more.
jfk06 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Oh no! *kicks James*
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Poor Bella. I would have loved to see more interaction with edward
ilovebdt2012 chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
wow you have my heart pounding right now good cliffy i'm speachless