|Reviews for As the Falcon Hath Her Bells: On the Wing|
| Carling chapter 15 . 2/3
Wow, Severus is very religious and old fashioned. I don't disapprove, I'm just not used to this in fan fiction. Usually the characters are depicted as atheist or neutral or pagan. And everyone acts like hormonal rabbits when it comes to sex. This is a nice refreshing change of pace. I like all kinds of stories and I certainly like the respect Sev has for Hermione.
I love Draco and I hope he rescues poor Narcissa someday. It's a shame he couldn't have gotten her out then and there. He is admirably focused. I couldn't have left without her myself if I had been in his place.
| Carling chapter 11 . 2/3
Oh for goodness sake, after everything she has SEEN them do, she hesitates? Sigh.
| Carling chapter 9 . 2/3
Well, better late than never, I suppose. Harry is back at long last. And apparently there has been some minor communication amongst the three friends. It was so downplayed I didn't think they had been in contact. What ever happened to the Welsh beauty Harry was courting?
I miss Tosca and Crookshanks every time they aren't in a scene.
| Carling chapter 6 . 2/3
It was rather prescient of you to write Draco as a rebel. At the time this was written, you couldn't know that he would indeed rebel and try to save Harry for being turned over immediately to Voldemort. Oh, he never became a brave hero, but he did small acts of rebelling against Voldemort. Of course it was his mum who committed the ultimate act of rebellion.
Even knowing that you don't have the knowledge of Harry's role in the prophecy to go by, I do still think Harry is acting really weird. I do also think it's strange beyond all reckoning that Hermione didn't keep in touch with Ron or Harry in all this time. Not even one owl? I know this is a Hermione/Severus story but I do not understand the need to sever all ties between former friends.
| Guest chapter 22 . 4/9/2013
really enjoyed reading - thanks for writing
| Montara chapter 23 . 2/7/2013
Great story. Thank you!
| Moonchild1212 chapter 22 . 11/9/2012
WOW... you rock. What an awesome ending for HG and SS. I loved every moment of your fic, and I love his familiar Tosca... beautiful plot. Thank you again for all of your hard work. I enjoyed both fics greatly!
| Moonchild1212 chapter 9 . 11/8/2012
Awww... I wish she would just tell him!
| Moonchild1212 chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Love the story so far! I'm ambivalent about the Holmes stuff. Not sure why everyone is kicking up such a fuss. Can't wait to see more HG/SS! Love your writing - witty and interesting!
| Melissa72 chapter 23 . 8/31/2012
Well done. The second book definitely picked up steam in the romance department...yay! Am glad that Hermione and Severus took vows before doing something sacred like having sex. Sex without marriage cheapens the relationship...for real love protects the mind, heart and soul of the beloved...and you can't express the all or nothing sacrifice of sex without the all or nothing sacrifice of marriage. They go hand in hand:) Sex outside marriage splices the soul...while sex within marriage strengthens it:)
Like that they had a little one...it's always good to see Severus lose it when faced with the idea of fatherhood. Hermione is a perfect match for him. And Tosca would be proud!
| SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 22 . 1/7/2012
I love these stories, and I've read them several times already. :)
| worrywart chapter 12 . 9/17/2011
I have read tons of Hermione and Severus stories in the last year that I discovered fanfiction and I must say that this is THE best and most sincere "marriage ceremony" I have ever read. No hype of wedding gowns, guest lists, and flowers...just two people vowing before themselves and whatever power they believe in. What was best of all is that they continued to honor their vows to each other afterward even when the 'we're going to die in the morning' moment was over.
| WideEyedWanderer chapter 21 . 9/7/2011
awwwwww! what a fantasic way to end the story!
this was even better than the first part and thats saying alot!
| SeverusSnape'sLove chapter 23 . 6/25/2011
I loved both this story and the one before it.
| mischabren chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I've never read Sherlock Holmes before-but this makes me want to read it! lol... okay, continuing on with the story now... loved the first book and am excited to see what happens in this one! :-)