|Reviews for Epiphanies|
| TeamOlicityLena chapter 31 . 1/22
great chapter I love your Dinah if she was like this on Smallville then i would have liked her, but I only liked her a little she was okay, if you write a sequel that would be cool, maybe some devistation or destroyed-Ness hint where im gettinguyen I reckon chollie stories are better when there full of agnst lots of it thanks for posting, good work;-)
- Elena (TeamOlicity123) TeamOlicity on Livejournal
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/20
I totally agree with Chloe' thinking Any world if Chloe and Oliver broke up it woul ld destroy her, both of them another great chapter keep them coming :-)
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/17
Another great chapter, I don't know I think chloe might have slept with a few people, maybe Davis? I'm not sure but their was this 'tension' ha yeah, the hooker in red and yellow was Mia dearden who adventuely becomes red Arrow in s11 she's only around for 2-3? episodes, Oliver never slept with her. I think he never slept with anyone in s9 except Chloe cause he knew he loved her, I don't why he asked Lois back, he probley felt responsible for Chloe in s8 so he thought h couldn't be with her, so he went back to Lois but its like he never listened to her in s8 my heart belongs with someone else speech he must have not listened hehe Chloe in order; Jimmy, lex?, Davis?, Oliver lol Oliver in order;?,?,?,?,tess, Lois, Chloetaken 4 life :-)
| Elena Chloe chapter 3 . 1/16
For someone who doesn't watch Smallville you sure write amazing Smallville fanfictions Haha I love you chlollie their so cute together hehe, you have made wonders for season 8 and you should be proud of that, for me this story is so far one of the best I've read right now I hope you write a squeal or something coz this story is amazing you should be proud of what you have archived. Well done :-)
Sincerely, Elena (Chloe) Livejournal: TeamOlicity123
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/9/2014
Had to give the story up, could not get behind Chloe's character in this. Emotional wise you have her acting like a 14 year old wishy washy little girl instead of a grown woman, does not make for a good read.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Don't know if I'll continue this story because right off the bat Chloe comes off looking like a selfish bitch and Jimmy's right she does owe him an explanation.
| historianic chapter 31 . 8/1/2014
Ok, so I'm way late to the party having only just discovered this fic. First off, thank you for writing such a fantastic piece! This has some of the best characterisation and plotting I've come across in fanfiction. It's an absolute pleasure to read and I think the smallville producers should have hired you to head the writing team. No doubt, we would have gotten a much better version of the show ;). Now focusing on this chapter specifically, weirdly I actually found myself more sympathetic towards Clark, rather than Oliver and the team. And I am no fan of Smallville Clark (or Smallville Lois, for that matter, but I digress). But I could understand where he was coming from. This was one of those moments where you are reminded just how alien and separate from us Clark is. There is something admirable about his desire to save Davis and find something redeemable in him. Though I don't think its for entirely altruistic reasons. Let's not forget that Clark has lost his entire home world, his people. It is natural, I think, that he would want to at least try to save his fellow Kryptonian/Kandorian, that he wouldn't want to be alone anymore. And I can also understand why he feels the need to handle what he sees as Kryptonian business without the team getting in the way. Granted, the high-handed way he's going about it is not helpful. But Oliver, Chloe and the team were not exactly all that willing to hear Clark out either, as much as they reamed him out for not being receptive to their plan. I'll be very curious to see where you take the Doomsday scenario over the next few chapters. Thanks again!
| Guest chapter 42 . 5/12/2014
That why Clark became the world greatest hero. And Oliver criminal that feel he is above the law. And since Clark died twice and almost died many time he risk his life more then Oliver and I Belive with Chloe push Clark of of her life. It was the last peice that just broke him. I mean Oliver lost his family Clark lost his race. Oliver was a Jerk till 20 Clark was saveing. People at 14, Oliver has many find. Clark mee
| M7007 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Love it, also, I am currently developing an Ollie/Chloe or Allison/Justin fic and I am stuck on the overall genre to use. If you could take my poll on my account page it would really help. Thanks.
| Amy chapter 43 . 7/2/2013
Congratulations on this great work!
Best Chollie fic ever :)
Keep up the good work
| malugargula chapter 43 . 5/17/2013
I just reviewed on lj but I have to favorite the fic and the author here
| Mark-sv chapter 43 . 4/7/2013
First of all, I'm so very sorry for not reviewing more often but I had to find time to write my own story and since I am usually a slow reader...
Anyway, I've caught up with your story now and I'm just blown away! First, kudos for the length of your story, it must have been tough! You pulled it off well and managed to include everyone in the plot, something I personally find hard to do.
And you got a way with writing Chlollie, things flow so easily between them when you write our adorable blondes! I also like how you handled the Doomsday scenario, it was better than on the show IMO!
Last thing, I don't share your views on the Lex/Chloe relationship at all (that's just my opinion) but you've made him softer here so that works for me!
A sequel would be fine by me but I wouldn't be heartbroken if you decided not to write it because to me, the story ends well and there is no apparent danger anymore. However, you can bring on your other Chlollie ideas, I know I'll read them!
Amazing story and writing skills! (I know it sounds like worshiping but really you deserve it for giving us this fic)
| Cobwebanne chapter 43 . 4/4/2013
Wow. That was quite a ride. Thank you do much for sharing this story.
| Booklover9477 chapter 43 . 3/8/2013
Awesome story! I love it! Im sorry you didn't get more reviews, you deserved triple the amount at least. I love chlollie and your writing is just amazing. I read your other chlollie fic with her time-travel powers and both of them are now my favorite smallville fics. I would love a good chlex or maybe even Bruce/Chloe one if you do that, I'd definetly read it. Oooh also crossovers are wonderful, hint hint ;). Keep up the fantastic work in whatever you do! Can't wait to read more of your stories, especially a sequel. Until next time, Laila :k
| bluechair244 chapter 43 . 2/22/2013
Wow! I can't believe this is over. Can I say I'm glad you gave Clark the boot? He was seriously draining my patience and I'm glad he took a hike. I believe I've said before that I love the use of show dialogue and your original stuff together. If not, consider it said now. I loved this whole whole whole thing! Some day I'm going to take a day and just read the whole thing through again!
P.S. looking forward to the return of the VM story!