Reviews for the artisan
Zamiel chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
This was an extremely unique read. Beautiful use of language here, it was colorful, illustrative, poetic. I've also never thought about Tifa from that plausible angle before - abandoned by everyone and left behind to take care of all the kiddies by herself, when she wants to run free like the rest of her friends. I was skeptical at first when Reno made his entrance, but you negotiated their characters well, and by the end I really liked having him in the picture. Wonderful work! Wonderful writing.
Facepalmistry chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Pretty good work for the most part. The choice of words seems a little clunky in places, and the word 'children' is miswritten as a singular noun a couple of times; that said, it doesn't particularly intrude into what is otherwise an imaginative take on an old chestnut.