Reviews for Heartbeat
Nelarun chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
The disjointed-ness of the first line threw me but from then I didn't notice it. It added so much to the story - gave it more life. A wonderful take on a childs thought progression as he not only grows up but attempts to please a father. Beautifully crafted and well written!

Nela
Mary Lou chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
This is so profound. Not only have you captured Uryuu's relationship with his father, but also the dilemna countless children have faced through the ages. Trying to please a parent that refuses to see the good in you, but instead concentrates on their alledged weaknesses. Good for you, Uryuu, for making the right choice finally! The last line is epic.
PennyOfTheWild chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I loved the closing line; it expresses Uryuu's sentiments beautifully.