Reviews for A holiday with destiny
Junior VB chapter 11 . 7/14
El fic necesita un poco de trabajo pero no está mal.
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The fic needs some work but not bad.
Junior VB chapter 6 . 7/14
Buen capitulo.
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Good chapter.
Junior VB chapter 4 . 7/14
Bloom no está teniendo un buen momento.
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Bloom is not having a good time.
Junior VB chapter 1 . 7/14
Buen comienzo.
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Good start.
DragonHeart chapter 3 . 4/2
Really? U spelled "Baltor's" name wrong. It's VALTOR. NOT Baltor. Plus Valtor is not the the only prob u made... U made bad punctuation when people were talking and spelled some wrong. No offense, but u are TERRIBLE at fanfiction
Guest chapter 11 . 2/28/2014
I 3 ur fanfics
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2013
bloom is not the leader just the main character
Guest chapter 3 . 4/10/2013
people with brown hair are called brunettes
EvenSatanLovesUnicorns chapter 11 . 7/2/2012
awesome ending!
Daisy54154 chapter 11 . 7/22/2011
I THIS STORY! Its so awesome keep up the good work.
keiko chapter 8 . 4/29/2011
plz update soon
vaniti chapter 7 . 4/18/2011
impresive this is really good and I definetly enjoyed...I can't wait for whats gonna happen next ) I will spread word around about your story cuz it deserves some credit...