Reviews for The Incredible Life 4
book-lover927 chapter 8 . 8/8/2011
I have three things to say

1)Good story series

2) learn to spell- I saw several spelling errors.

3) Grammer-your grammer is horrible. Instead of "Mr. Threehorn starts asking questions to Blacktail." IT SHOULD BE "Mr. Threehorn started to ask Blacktail a question." I may not be an English Major or a straight A student but your grammer is s***
horsechick27 chapter 8 . 5/16/2011
Awesome chapter!
horsechick27 chapter 6 . 4/19/2011
Awesome chapter!
JudgmentDragon25 chapter 5 . 4/15/2011
Is indian Jones gonna be there? This is gonna be (singtone) FUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNN!
horsechick27 chapter 5 . 4/7/2011
Awesome chapter!
horsechick27 chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
Great chapter!
horsechick27 chapter 3 . 3/23/2011
Good chapter, I am really glad that you brought back Leslie and that she net her grandchildren.
horsechick27 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Wow, good start.