Reviews for Presence Of Mind
latte2 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Oh, just the right amount of suspense. Awesome!
alpha2nd2003 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
Love this story. The personalities seem to match up perfectly to the original characters. The writing is great though there are some errors; I suspect you mean that Soundwave is under no delusion that his shivering was unnoticeable etc. Great job! Wish there was a sequel to this :D
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Nicely creepy, and very well-imagined. The misuse of some words, and deployment of others whose meaning is obviously unknown to the writer, mars the story slightly.