Reviews for Luscious Sin
Lilypop chapter 20 . 3/30
Everything I dreamed of and more. Hurrah!
Lily chapter 12 . 3/28
*claps hands happily* yayyyyyyyyy!
Lily chapter 7 . 3/28
I love your story, of course! Very interesting, but I know how frustrating writing can be sometimes, keep at it!
The Freaks chapter 13 . 2/2
I re-read my post on the last chapter, and was kinda upset with myself. So I have some more things to add to it.
This chapter made me angry, sad, and hateful all at the sake time. And all aimed at the Joker. It was just disappointing, albiet in character, that he resorted (if Joker does such a thing. Resorting, I mean.) to that. This is really the first fic I've read where Joker rapes someone. It's just not his usual game, ya know what I mean? I felt like my last comment portrayed that I was condoning his actions, when that was not what I had meant at all. Joker is still an eccentric selfish bitch with a major superiority complex. And yet, maybe not at the current moment though..., I still would call him the best and one of my favorite characters of all time.
The Freaks chapter 37 . 11/27/2016
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Oh. My. God. I knew, when Tre ran out, that bomb would go off. Funny, the first thing I thought of though, was the dark knight delayed bomb scene. And then I wanted to cry. I loved Tre, he was awesome. And he was the perfect best friend for Joker. My heart literally fell to my feet when I read this part, oh, and the part where Joker said he was leaving, though I had kinda predicted he would leave Gotham, but I didn't really want to be right. … *much tears very sad*…


I still wanna cry…for a better reason…but I still wanna cry…
The Freaks chapter 36 . 11/26/2016
THIS IS CORRECRING MY PREVIOUS COMMENT, SEEING THAT THE ERRORS I HAD MADE WERE NOT ABLE TO BE IGNORED.
Previously, in the chapter where he drugged jayde to make the video, he said that after he was finished "I. Will. Be. Gone.", or something to that extant. I was just trying to figure out what that meant. At first I thought it to possibly be a hint at his death, then I read that you were contemplating a third book, so I knew that wasn't it. Then, it came to mind, it may be foreshadowing him leaving Gotham or something, which is equally just as bad. I also had a few more theories, but those two made the most sense.
Final thing. I just find it kinda that the Batman makes no appearance in this fic, and not that I'm complaining. Batman is overrated. (Jkjk, please don't kill me. I was only joking. Though I do personally believe the Joker better).
Haha, I lied, that wasn't the final thing. I love your Joker. He is different, as in not being portrayed a complete fuckin monster, yet still is his homicidal, freaky self, but with an actual human side, which is appreciated. And I am also amazed that you pulled it off. I do believe he has strayed from the Heath Ledger version, not that you were aiming for that picture though anyway. But it's good, because you're making it your own character, and I love it. Thanks for an amazing story, and keep up with good work.
The Freaks chapter 35 . 11/26/2016
I hate myself. I haven't read this chapter yet, but I was looking at reviews and read one about an ending and I know that Tre dies and inform want that to happen. I hate that, and I HATE myself. I may just go cry before reading chapter. Ok. On to read this chapter...
The Freaks chapter 34 . 11/26/2016
Previously, in the chapter where he drugged jayde to make the video, he said that after he was finished "he. Would. Be. Gone.", or something to that extant. I was just trying to figure out what that meant. At first I thought it to possibly be a hint at his death, then I read that you were contemplating a third book, so I knew that wasn't it. Then, it came to mind, it may be foreshadowing him leaving Gotham or something, which is equally as bad. I also had a few more theories, but those two made the most sense.
Final thing. I just found out kinda that the Batman makes no appearance in this fix, and not that I'm complaining. Batman is overrated. (Jkjk, please don't kill me. I was only joking. Though I do personally believe the Joker better).
Haha, I lied. I love your Joker. He is unorthodox, yet still his homicidal, freaky self, which is awesome that you were able to pull it off. I do believe he has started from the Heath Ledger version, but is also good, because are making it your own character, and I love it. Thanks for an amazing story, and keep up with good work.
The Freaks chapter 30 . 11/25/2016
Might he of also done it to lead the police off her trail, or possibly another reason...?
The Freaks chapter 23 . 11/23/2016
"He had finally found himself another Tre."

Oh shit, referring to the ending...
The Freaks chapter 15 . 11/21/2016
I love this..., but hate you for letting us go through this. It's on of the best stories, and it just kinda hurts, ya know? It just kinda hurts...
The Freaks chapter 12 . 11/20/2016
I think it works. All the tension, and sometimes the lack there of, were bound to blow up sometime, and I think it was fitting in the matter of which it did. So kudos for that. Not saying I'm happy about the events, but I am not the author, and if I were, this book would suck.
Keep up the wonderful writing and the great story!
The Freaks chapter 10 . 11/20/2016
Stop putting up fake chapters, it kills me!
The Freaks chapter 6 . 11/20/2016
Noooo...
The Freaks chapter 4 . 11/19/2016
Ugh, this is good already!
I personally love your Joker, and agree that he fits Ledger's portrayal best, with your own details tweaking him a bit. Anyway, it's really good, and I am sOooOoO glad you have written them!
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