Reviews for Protecting the Innocent
PXLight chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
I don't think it's a good idea to start an OC fanfic off with the OCs themselves. It would've been better if we met the traditional characters from the fandoms first THEN introduce the OCs slowly (so we have a better grasp as to what they're like) ...You didn't even tell us what they look like o_0

AKA lack of detail.

Otherwise, interesting start to the plot: reminds me a ton of UTK's beginning P Well, I can't wait to see more along with how this intertwines w/ Ace Attorney D

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