Reviews for Sledding
Sibrael chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
It was nice reading a fic about Team 7 before Sasuke defects - there aren't enough of them.
Beeeee chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Woah woah woaaaaah!

That was so sosososo good! Oh my god!

I adore your writing style, also. Plus, you just made my favourite kind of ff - pre_shippuden. Aaaaah

But seriously, i really love the way you portrayed Sasuke in this, it was sooo in character. Also, i liked how you didnt make Sakura tooooo independent from Sasuke and too grown up as i've read some 'strong, clever, non-clingy' Sakura impressing Sasuke stories where its just too exaggerated, yknow?

You must write more! More i tell you!

Unicorn Paige chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Ha-ha, I still giggled at the octopus balls, but seriously, this just gets better every time I read it!

I don't think I told you how much I loved how you handled Sakura. Well, I did! The way you highlighted her intelligence was perfect! It wasn't overbearing, but it was enough to get through to Sasuke. And when they had to snuggle together for warmth and Sasuke was surprised that her confidence had seemed to disappear? So great! It was another one of those little things that made the whole scenario feel real.

And Kakashi praising Sakura? Squealy squeal! I don't think I'll ever be able to get through this story without being reduced to a pile of mush. Amazing job!

The Scarlett Ribbon chapter 1 . 3/17/2011

I love Team 7 back when they were, you know, still a team. This is my favourite of yours so far, I have to say. Each time you post something it is somehow even better than the previous. I love Sakura's developing independence - asking Naruto to the carnival, going sledding despite Sasuke's disapproval, coming up with a plan to avoid bashing into a tree- so good. So, SO GOOD.

My favourite line was Sasuke's petulant "He hated sweets anyway."

I do have a question though; is this in a slightly alternate timeline? Like, assuming the massacre happened but Sasuke did not leave to join Orochimaru? Or does this take place sometime before he leaves? Just wondering!

Another wonderful fic, Indecision. I think I might have to re-read it before I go to work. Anyway- here's to hoping more of your work is yet to come! Thanks!
x.Sasu.Saku.x chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Kawaii! I love it! And it wasnt Sasuke wasn't OOC, so thanks :) But can you explain Shimatta joke to me?
cherryjubilee chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Very pretty. I love stories where Sakura comes into her own and surprises Sasuke.
xxXAmarantaXxx chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
It's nice to see a well-written and cute pre-shippuden sasusaku story. You did good.
Kaze and Kiba chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Hey I'm reviewing twice in the same day but it'a worth it. I love that Sakura invited Naruto to the carnival when he came to her rescue after Sasuke's snotty responses. And he got so jealous, hehe.

The mt. shimatta joke is awesome. I wonder how many people will get it, lol.

Holy crud my computer just went completely dead while I was writing this. And I was panicing because I haven't done a backup since december! Man, I would have been up a creek! I would have been writing you hoping you had saved Itch!

Phew, it was a disconnected power supply, damn. I better go find my Maxtor and do a full backup. I had a good chunk of fk sitting here too, unsaved.

Ahaha, I'm so lucky, back to my review. I can't believe it didn't erase it! It only logged me out!

I love little sasukins getting so dang jealous, ehehe.

And Sakura just took over and saved the day. I hope he always has those warm feelings when he thinks of her.

I love that he bought her a gift and was proud of her, so cute.

Good job!
ILoveSxS chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Kyorinrin chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
very cute. love it.
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