|Reviews for When three began two Hall Family|
| Diablo Priest chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
Oh no! Looks like two will be one. Tense little mystery in this chapter. I look forward to more.
| Rori Potter chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
Poor Sophie. Update soon.
| hopelessromanticgurl chapter 5 . 5/29/2012
Poor Sophie! Great chapter I loved it!
| hopelessromanticgurl chapter 4 . 11/28/2011
This sounds like a really cool story. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
| Diablo Priest chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
You kept up the suspense really well. That's a harrowing scene! I like this image: "Sophie looked up at him and put her tiny bloody hands on his cheeks." Simple and powerful.
| Diablo Priest chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
Yeah, keeping going! This is well written. Little Sophie's passion for words comes through strongly. There's some good dramatic tension in here too. And the villain is worthy of the best fairy tales! The villain's actions are quite shocking - I didn't expect that as the movie is light fare.
| EVERanOptimist chapter 3 . 6/3/2011
OMG! Update update update please please please! This is not an articulate review and for that I am sorry but I need to know whathappensnext!
| Rori Potter chapter 3 . 5/28/2011
Oh my. That was brilliant. Update soon.
| HotReads chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
OMG! This story is amazing! Great Job! Pleasee make more Letters to Juliet stories, i love you writing style! Update soon! Keep up the great work!
| I Am Me And I Can Fly chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
That was a really nice story! Poor Sophie, her mom is strict and mean :-(