Reviews for My Immortal
Angelique chapter 13 . 3/19
I physically cannot with this dumpster fire of a fanfiction BAHAHAHAHHA

but still, it’s quite literally a piece of memory. I wonder where and how the author is doing now. To be honest, as much as people say how bad this is, it’s funny and is a fundamental piece of literature that every future fanfic author, or a book author, in my opinion, should read. It highlights absolutely EVERYTHING one should avoid when writing something. Nevertheless, even though this is a flaming shit train to fucking hell, you can still get a quick laugh at it. Thanks for the memories, MidnightEssence!
Guest chapter 3 . 3/17
That last part is Legendary xd
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17
My eyes are bleeding!
Latina Poo chapter 2 . 3/17
Yo this shi slaps I LMAO LOTFL I am succh a huge fan! Ples don't ever stop writing
Not it mom chapter 13 . 3/12
This fanfiction sounds like something my wannabe emo that fakes depression friend danyelle would write
Paul Revere chapter 13 . 3/11
The Mary-Sues are coming! The Mary-Sues are coming! Drop those muskets and get your Anti-Mary-Sue Potions instead!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11
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Guest chapter 14 . 3/9
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Ayana chapter 2 . 3/7
omfg i love GC bleh
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 11 . 3/6
i'm done i'm gone good bye i give up
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 10 . 3/6
existence is pain i'm dead and dying i hate my self and everyone around me my iq has dropped by half and i want to choke this illiterate bitch out with my boot strings
my bf (yEs In ThAt WaY) has to suffer with me to cause i haven't been able to go a paragraph (as much as paragraphs exist in this book(if you can call it that)) without texting him to complain. this. is. ridiculous
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 9 . 3/6
is it just me or are the ans getting harder and harder to read as we go on
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 8 . 3/6
i have no idea what was happening in all three chapters (i think it was three at least) but i'm pretty sure there was homophobia sooo...
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 7 . 3/6
1: what
2: the amount of homophobia my god
3: the scariest thing about this is the grammar
4: i think this might be the most misogynistic chapter in the 'book'
5: biology class? in hogwarts? bitch please. i guess any sort of accuracy at all was to much to ask from you
Fae-Berry-the-Cryptid chapter 6 . 3/6
1: i'm assuming continuity is to much to ask?
2: the only way i can really react to the rest of the chapter is 𝐖𝐇𝐀𝐓 𝐓𝐇𝐄 𝐄𝐕𝐄𝐑 π‹πŽπ•πˆππ† π…π”π‚πŠ 𝐏𝐋𝐄𝐀𝐒𝐄 𝐆𝐄𝐓 πŒπ„ π’πŽπŒπ„ π‡πŽπ‹π˜ 𝐖𝐀𝐓𝐄𝐑 π“πŽ 𝐁𝐔𝐑𝐍 𝐌𝐘 π„π˜π„π’ πŽπ”π“ π–πˆπ“π‡
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