Omg... this is an insult to my eyes! its horrible! the actual author of this story should get thrown in Fanfic writer Azkaban! Haha Thanks so much for uploading!

Don't thou dare to use Olde English, if thou knows not how to use it properly.

Okay, I'm usually one of those, "A for effort" kind of people but this is ridiculous.

God save your soul for making fun of Resident Evil...

Poop

I feel like I have just experienced the pain of a bacteria in a homosexual mans anus shortly after a rimming by a vacuum cleaner in outer space.

Another chapter of this might be enough to turn me into a pedophile raping murderer. So I think I should quit now.

Can't do it. Nope. I'm out. I'm done.

I'm really sorry, I don't mean to offend you at all, just trying to give some constructive criticism. You need to work on your spelling, grammar, punctuation, use of adjectives and plot line. And also the repetition of words like ebony and black and the description of doing makeup tends to be a little overbearing so try using a thesaurus to help that out. And just one last thing, the name is a little bit over the top and ridiculous. Hope I helped; much love.

Too much sex and grammar errors

Excretion? Well, just from Latin and English I would say that means we should...shit. Like, Excements.
Oh, did anyone except me realise that a reviewer (draco luvr or something) said Harrywhorecrux?
Voldemort with High Heels.
Sex pack.
I love this.

this story is cool, retards. Stop hating it.

This is seriously awful

i was so like on the edge of my seat and then you ended it wit an ending lioke that, liek come one doood, iw ill halp you frward in tiem, even i acan make a better ending then that doooodoodododododod, what happeb whe tbey go throiwg tim, don/;t laecve at hanegr of clidfds

I loled at the idiots criticizing negatively this story.
Like if the crap you write/like were actually better than this.

Guess what? Its not.

And before you call me a "troll" or something stupid like that, I would like to add Im a completely serious with my comment: Tara Gilesbie is a much better writer than her haters, arrogant dunces.