|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Wow chapter 5 . 5/20
Never in the many years that I've spent in this world have I encountered a piece of literature so beautiful and life changing. From the moment I began to read this, the clear magnum opus of the human race, I knew there was a god. I wasn't intending to become a murderer, but this has shown me the light.
| Memes chapter 1 . 5/19
What the actual fuck did I just waste a large sum of time reading
| hello chapter 6 . 5/19
um it was interesting...who am i kidding? i died laughing this is not the best but it makes for good comedy XD
| dERP chapter 3 . 5/19
| Anna-matronic chapter 8 . 5/18
Dear lord. I hope to any god that may exist that this was made as a joke. The author cannot write. Mary sues are everywhere you look.
Here it is. The pinnacle of humanity. This is the best thing that we're ever going to get. At that, let me go shoot myself in the foot.
| llll chapter 2 . 5/18
poop this is porn anad poop
| Don'tHaveAccount chapter 3 . 5/18
Wow. I think I like (*shudder*) Twilight (*noise of innocent fangirl barfing*) better (*even more barfing*)
Solid truth: Evony or whatever her name's a Mary-Sue because guess what? Depression is a Mary Sue trait. I'm not sure if I want to laugh at this story or cry or even be offended that it could ever be posted on the internet...
It could be improved by being completely rewritten... a few hundred times.
| jodyowl11 chapter 3 . 5/17
I can't even at this point
no, I actually think I threw up a little
well nvr had that happen before
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/17
What? Just.. Wha?
The cringe is real!
| satan chapter 7 . 5/16
Hello i'm a viower and i excreted a lot but I was still scraed by this chapter and I'm suing.
| Crookshanks chapter 5 . 5/16
I HATH TELEKENESIS
| MatchaMida chapter 11 . 5/16
I can't believe I came back to read this a second time.
| 7doom chapter 8 . 5/16
Alright, so the original author may possibly be Dyslexic. But it is no excuse for this absolute piece of shite that has entered the hearts and minds of humanity.
-Depression is not something that can be flamboyantly flounted as 'goffick', and just because one is Goth, Emo, has Depression, ect. does not necessarily mean that they cut. It isn't a thing to talk about so disrespectfully
-I doubt people go around porking, making out, ect. in the middle of forests, hallways, ect. Not normally anyway, but the amount of times it's happened so far is preposturous.
-I have never seem so many f****ing swear words in the same sh*ty, cr ppy, F****ing sentences.
But on the other hand, it made me laugh like all hell. Some of the reviews have restored my faith in humanity. And somehow, this has managed to lighten my day, because now I know that there is something to compare even the most appalling of my works to.
So thank-you for this beautiful, inexplicably amazing work of literature.
| infinite eternity chapter 4 . 5/15
"Yeah." I roared.
| MisterX chapter 11 . 5/15
What did I just read?