|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Akatsuki DeiDei chan chapter 2 . 2/17
This is so fucking bad my eyes are bleeding what even is this oh my god why
| ashleigh chapter 7 . 2/16
this is so fucking gooood! i am a gothic myself so i relate so much to this sotry even though it is made up but i love Vampire so fucking much i want him to fuck me so snap can watch. dumbly dore is also rlly hot too, more pl1111111111111111!s
| XxXxLoveandKissesxXxX chapter 3 . 2/16
REVIEW MY FANFIC WITH GOOD REVIEW! why does this crap have reviews, but i don't have good reviews on my fanfic. EXPLAIN YOU SIMPLETONS!
| thatwickedumbrella chapter 10 . 2/15
I need a new fanfic that explains exactly how and when snap got the dork mark on his you-know-what. Was it a dare? Does he and volfmart have matching tattoos? I NEED TO KNOW
| thatwickedumbrella chapter 9 . 2/15
You had me at "if ur a homophone den fuk of"
| TheTypicalIndian chapter 11 . 2/15
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Oh. My. God. I just found this through some random reddit stream, and OMFG THIS WAS SO WORTH MY TIME. AHAHAHAHAHHA. I used to be goth. Still have the nose piercings and the red streaks, and somehow, I find this extremely stereotypical. Psshhttt. BUT FUCK THIS IS SO FUNNY I CAN'T GET OVER IT.
May Ms. Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way one day find her way back to this beautiful site, and look over this and it's amazing comments.
Also, guys, this is the perfect thing to read when you're getting over a break up! Pair it with some mint chocolate chip ice cream, (As I did) and you've got a hilarious combination.
Fangz for putting this up.
| CorinnetheAnime chapter 11 . 2/15
What...the...heck...did...I...just...read? I don't care about the fact that I'm flaming and I probably speak for almost everyone here: this is most definitely the WORST fanfic in the history of writing! Even cavemen can do a better story...with UGLY PICTURES nonetheless!
This whole story is so stupid! My view on Harry Potter has been changed forever! :( Also, what is a prep? How can I be a prep if I don't even know what is is?
Congratulations, you (not you specifically) just killed everyone's brains! I hope you're happy! :(
| Harri luvrz 2008 chapter 4 . 2/15
this is the greatest piece of literature i have ever read i am so honored to be a part of history
| Biggus chapter 1 . 2/15
This is by far the worst thing ever written.
/Round 2 and Jeff the Killer Vs. Michael Myers is better than this.
| Icey chapter 2 . 2/14
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Ugh! This is awful!
| Finite gravity chapter 11 . 2/14
I think I'm dying... This monstrosity... Be warned, you won't survive reading this thing all the way through... every second of reading this 'story' will do nothing but anally rape your brain cells and inject them with so much stupidity that your brain will shrivel up and die, all the while, whispering out,"why? Why? Please noooo..." Turn back now and save your selves while you still can... it's too late for me... I know that now... Goodbye...
| Finite gravity chapter 9 . 2/14
This... This thing... This culmination of all the worst attributes a fanfic can have... It..it... Oh man just someone, please... kill it with fire
| Lord of Shades chapter 11 . 2/14
can't...read...any...more...IQ slipping...away...no more...brain...cells left...goodbye evil world...let my family know...never to read this...
| Lord of Shades chapter 8 . 2/14
i'm confused since when does not shopping at hot topic make you a prep in fact i don't know what a prep is i looked it up and after going thoguh a bunch of site can now safely say it's someone who attends a preperation school. i don't shop at hot topic, and i am one hundred percent certin i don't attend one. I'm very knew to this fanfiction thing, and not too good at writing, so i looked up worst fanfiction, and BAM this horrible disgusting mess greets me. There is one thing i have to say the original auther might want to take note of though,: i'm sorry, sorry for you. it's clear your trolling or feeling left out of the goth group. if it's the second one then i feel sorry that you were rejected so harshly you created this...thing...if the first reason is at hand then i apologise fir having to live with yourself day after day after day. endureing the sadistic mind that came up with this abomanation i am truly sorry for you, you poor little thing. this is LOS (Lord of Shades) Signing off