|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/6
My cat saw this and jumped out the window to end the pain.
| Ohcomeon chapter 7 . 1/6
This just horrible on so many levels. And why gothic? Why?
People might hate me for this but, I HATE EBONY.
You ruined my lucky colour, Ebony! You freaking RUINED my lucky colour! What's my zodiac patron gonna say now, huh?
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/5
I think my IQ just went from this...that.
I can't, I just can't, I need to go cry in a corner
| moo chapter 2 . 1/5
this is magnificent
| faggotnigger chapter 8 . 1/5
I equally love and hate this, I have been inspired to slit my wrists and jump out of several windows. Overall I would rate this 10/10. It has awakened the emotional of suicidal *dis is ma OC emotion, u fukken preps).
| SylviaHunterOfArtemis chapter 5 . 1/5
Uh I'm pretty sure telekinesis is not the power to be used in this instance it's telepathy
| rhrfj chapter 11 . 1/5
| New York Times chapter 6 . 1/4
This wonderful piece of work is today's equivalent to Shakespeare. The grammar and spelling in this story is beyond exemplary and the use of the words "goffic" and "fangz" are the best examples of figurative language I have ever seen. The totally necessary descriptions of their clothes add so much to the plotline and enrich the details of the story. Every character was totally developed and in character. In fact, their gothic counterparts are superior to J.K. Rowling's original versions. The lead character, "Enoby", is a role model for many young readers and takes a marvelous stand against preps and posers. Her romance with Draco is beautifully written and their frequent sex scenes are a satisfying read. I reccomend this fanfiction to everyone who wishes to enrich themselves with descriptions of Gerard Way's sexiness and gothic cereal blood. Excellent work. Keep on writing. 5 stars. (:
| hi chapter 5 . 1/4
crookshanks is hermione's cat... not a spell...
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REPOSTING THIS
| LieutenantThalia chapter 9 . 1/4
My favourite part was when Voldemort turned into Darth Vader...
| LieutenantThalia chapter 6 . 1/4
I give up
| LieutenantThalia chapter 5 . 1/4
Thou clearly ne'er hath depression, or thine's writing would be way more informed. Also, thou clearly hath not read the books, or thous't know that, A) Voldemort doth not talk as thus, B) Voldemort doesn't need/have a broomstick C) not every person who has slept with a person of the same gender automatically has AIDS, and D) you can dress her up however you like but she'll still be a Mary Sue!
| LieutenantThalia chapter 3 . 1/4
I'm not sure what's funnier:
"I sed stup flaming!"
"he put his thingie into my you-know-what"
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUCKERS!"
| LieutenantThalia chapter 2 . 1/4