Reviews for My Immortal
articulateGamer chapter 11 . 8/6/2013
... Is that the end?
Sam Nichol chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
0/10 the stairs would have collapsed when draco tried to climb them into the girls dorm.

- S. Nich1
Smockey chapter 3 . 8/6/2013
I am whimpering and cringing. whimpering and cringing i tell you.
xXBloody.ApocalypseXx chapter 11 . 8/5/2013
Snap and Lumpkin! :D
And Snipe, Dumblydum...ROTFLMFAO
xXBloody.ApocalypseXx chapter 10 . 8/5/2013
McGoggle and Snoop! XD I laughed so hard...I think I died.
Snape being Snap, Snake and Snope...I really though there would be a Snoopy somewhere...
cuteemogurllove chapter 9 . 8/5/2013
i love this story so much! ! screw h8rs this is a great!
Kittywizarrr chapter 6 . 8/5/2013
FINALLY. I have strange, forbidden fruit of FanFiction known as My Immortal! YAY! Wait, why am I getting excited for the best worst fanfic ever made? Oh well...
jingle041 chapter 8 . 8/5/2013
"thanks 4 teching muh japnese."

Kawai.

*facepalm*
Jim chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
This is really bad.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/4/2013
I couldn't even make it past a stake being called a steak. I'm done.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/4/2013
Is no one going to comment on the fact she uses crookshanks as a spell when that's just the cat's name...?
King Scourge22 chapter 11 . 8/4/2013
What can I say? I honestly feel bad for you, putting yourself through the torture that is re-posting this rubbish. Every single atom of my body regarding my hobby as a writer has spontaneously combust and I am tempted to gouge out the horrible memory (and my eyes) of this work before violently heaving myself out of a window. Thank you for re-posting this, and I will pray you recover from the trauma associated with it.
englnads chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Oh, what's that I hear? It's the collective IQ of the entire world. Burning.
Crazed King chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
Does Dumbles allow coffins? And goths? And non-school uniforms? How'd Harry get so older and not be noticed by Ebony? Why am I still reading this? I'm hungry.
Crazed King chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
OCCNESS. TO THE MAX.
Heh... She says this isn't mary sue huh? Pfft...
I gotta compete with her for the worst fanfiction eva. Its gonna be so much fun! XD
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