Reviews for My Immortal
Guest chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
Oh god the cringing XD
kill yourself chapter 3 . 7/14/2016
please for the love of god
catachthonicCacaesthesia chapter 14 . 7/13/2016
This story is perhaps the most well thought-out, descriptive and self-expressive piece of literature I have ever read. The writing was magnificent. The use of descriptive language was on point. The spelling, the elavated language. The plot was very intriguing. The action was quite good.

In all, I believe this story deserves to be recognized for the glorious masterpiece that it is. I just cannot criticize it, it is just that perfect.

10/10 for being the most vomit-inducing, saddening piece of literature I've ever seen (if you could call it that). The effort made in this story was beautiful, though! It's always good to stay optimistic!

(And yes, I do know that the owner of this account did not write this. Just had to review.)
Crafting101 chapter 2 . 7/13/2016
nope can't continue too terrible
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2016
I was bored so I changed this chapter up a little, I know its' a bad but you can't make diamonds out of shit.

The next day I woke up a little later than I would usually but I really didn't care. I put on a black miniskirt and a matching top with red skulls all over it, and lastly a pair of high heeled boots. I put on four pairs of earrings, then I spraypainted the tips of my hair with purple hair dye.
In the Great Hall, I munched on some Count Chocula cereal with blood instead of milk, and a glass of blood. Suddenly someone bumped into me, knocking the red beverage out my hand, resulting in the blood spilling over my top.
"Bastard!" I cursed at the guy angrily. I regretted saying it when I looked up because I saw the pale face of a gothic boy with spiked black hair that had red streaks in it. He was wearing so much eyeliner, I was scanning down his face and realised he was wearing black lipstick. I'm sure it's Harry Potter but he didn't have his glasses anymore and now he was wearing red contact lenses just like Draco and there was no scar on his forehead anymore.
He had slight stubble on his chin, also he had a sexy English accent. He looked exactly like Joel Madden. He was so sexy that I felt firey hot warmth travel down to my core.
"I'm so sorry." he said in an apologetic voice.
"That's all right. What's your name?" I mused.
"My name's Harry Potter, although most people call me Vampire these days." he grumbled.
"Why?" I asked curiously.
"Because I love the taste of human blood." he chuckled and ran his hands through his hair nervously.
"Well, I am a vampire." I confessed.
"Really?" he asked shocked, eyes wide mouth slightly agape.
"Yeah." I laughed.
We sat down to talk for a while. Then Draco approached us and asked if I would come with him since he had something to show me, I said goodbye to Vampire Harry and left with Draco.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/11/2016
I'm very glad you didn't write this and I don't even want to know who did...
your admirerer chapter 2 . 7/11/2016
fucking kys faggot
Guest chapter 5 . 7/10/2016
It was so bad and why do you keep saying the F word?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
It was bad
Mara chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
I gave up. Ive never come upon this story even though I Read a lot of fanfiction for years, but I cant finish this. Thanks for the repost, I got to sort of see why this original fanfiction has its own Wikipedia page..
demonicEnhancer chapter 3 . 7/10/2016
What the FUCK... O-O
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2016
I know people who make fun of your writing and I wasn't entirely sure what they were talking about until I read the first chapter, if you were going for being an illiterate, ignorant, HP fan mob starter than you couldn't have done it more perfectly
NUT A FUKIN PREP chapter 4 . 7/9/2016
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9/2016
Omg I thought this fanfic was lie. But I was mistaken it is the worst fanfic EVER WRITTEN
Siara Black.Demigod chapter 14 . 7/9/2016
I agree that My Immortal is the worst fanfic ever I never even knew about it until yesterday when I said Dumblydore in a group chat and someone mentioned it I then read the first chapter and wanted to cry. I was sad that the worst fanfic ever had to be Harry Potter related. I am a huge Harry Potter fan and this really broke my heart. I actually found XXXbloodyrists666XXX,'s account and it has her bio and lets just say it is about the same as this fic. I'm not saying anything against you I'm just saying that this actually broke my heart that someone had the decency to make the Harry Potter fandom look down in shame when we hear of this you for posting the original chapters so we fans of the Harry Potter universe that post wonderful fanfictions on this site
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