|Reviews for My Immortal|
| Hired Killer chapter 7 . 11/9/2012
Where the hell does this person live? i m gonna shoot them in the kneecaps bcause of their horrible spelling and even worse writing skills.
| mindfucked chapter 11 . 11/9/2012
So, Ebony (a.k.a enoby, eboby, enopby, enpopy, TARA) is a vampire/witch who constantly changes outfits, has sex, gets all the guys, has no concept of past, present and future, loves GM, GC, MCR and marylin manson, wants satan to make her more ugly and i do not get how this is at all related to HP!
"Oh yeah o have a confession after she got expuld I murdered her and den loopin did it with her cause he's a necphilak."
"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!"
Draco ran out even though he was naked. He had a really big you-know-what but I was too mad to care.
Anyway, I started crying tears of blood and then I slit both of my wrists.
Snap was spying on me and he was taking a video tape of me! And Loopin was masticating to it!
"I do but Diabolo changed it into a pentagram for me and I always cover it up with foundation."
raven u suk u fuken bich gimme bak mah fukijn swteet
BTW fangz 2 britney5655 4 techin muh japnese!
I SED STUP FLAMMING! if u do den ur a fuken prep! fangz 2 raven 4 da help n stuf. u rok!
| Lol chapter 11 . 11/9/2012
This seems slightly less angsty than the actual books. *SEVERE SARCASM*
| OwlAsh chapter 5 . 11/9/2012
this shit is effed up...
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/8/2012
Oh god make it staaaahahahaaap!
| xXDiscordianDesiresXx chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Haii very gewd storeh I lyk! I'm in the process of writin an awesum storeh just lyk this click hurr: s/8684401/1/Enoby-Lightning
| Nick-Nacks chapter 11 . 11/7/2012
WHAT HAPPENS AFTER SHE GOES FORWARD IN TIME. I GOTS TA NO
| LOOOOOOL chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Guys, I've read worse fanfiction than this! "Kidnapped by Sexy Men", an infamous hetalia OC reader insert fanfiction actually makes "My Inmortal" look a bit decent
| Oh. My. God chapter 4 . 11/6/2012
This is worse than Twilight. It's worse than the first five chapters of 50 Shades of Grey, because I didn't have the guts to continue. It's worse than the parody of Twilight.
It's. So. Bad.
What's wrong with it:
-the OOC characters
-the dialogue tags
-The fact that Ebony acts as if she doesn't know HP, after she specifically says he didn't have glasses or a scar on his forehead ANYMORE. That implies she knows him. And of course he had a freaking British accent. HOGWARTS IS IN ENGLAND! We've all read the books. Most of us have seen the movies. Many of us can recite the entire biographies of every single character. We're not IDIOTS.
Have you seen Tara Gillesbie (or whatever her name is)'s Twitter? It's almost as bad.
| sticksandstones chapter 11 . 11/4/2012
...honestly I'm surprised that she spelled the title right...
cuz like o meh SATAN! shez lik a fuking prp wif da way she spellz (geddit cuz shez like a stanic goffik witch and shit)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
"It was...Tom Bombadil!11111" I've never seen a more well-read troll. You know, this story took devotion. Also the Tom Bombadil song (poem?) is now firmly stuck in my head.
and hargid n vapire i still a betr lov storie den twilite lol (geddit cuz there gottik vapires)
| Chelty-chan and YeahWhatever12 chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
o.m.g so like he draco dies by commiting suicide by slitting his wrists? but then earlier in the story it said he couldnt die if his wrists are slit cos hes a vampire?
okay my brain is fried!
blahahahahahahhha this is so horrible lol
THANKS FOR REUPLOADING IT!
| Carmine chapter 11 . 11/1/2012
Oh god, why? I managed to read it. I regret it. This made my brain hurt. I hope that this Tara girl is just a troll. I don't believe in existence of people this stupid.
| OccasionallyCreative chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
If you put this into Microsoft Word (or any other word processing programme), then it would explode. This is that bad.
| Kokotheevilone chapter 5 . 10/31/2012
It is funny, they said.
You won't regret reading it, they said.
You will definitely laugh your head off at it, they said.
You will probably not want to stick your head into a blender, they said.