Reviews for My Immortal
CyberSpaceWitch chapter 4 . 1/25/2016
This is fucking art. "He whimpered." "I roared." So evocative. So expressive. I want to see an interpretive dance version of this and I'm actually not being ironic or sarcastic.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/25/2016
"I started to cry tears of blood down my pallid face." This is me, reading this story
BadCharlotte69 chapter 6 . 1/24/2016
this spoke to me on a deep emotional level thank you
Guest chapter 11 . 1/24/2016
Getting kidney stones is better then reading this
Guest chapter 4 . 1/24/2016
NOOOOOOO NOT HARRY OHMYGOF FJWPDG1PZFQPVD this is my end
Guest chapter 5 . 1/24/2016
THIS WHoLE BOOK IS CRAP!
Aspiring-Creator chapter 2 . 1/22/2016
The infamously bad, poorly written and overall eye-bleedingly terrible My Immortal has finally graced my eyes (for better or worse) and all I have to say is... is... is...

People consider Ultimate Harem to be the worst thing ever over this? While I may not be a fan of the Harry Potter series, I still know enough to say that this story was pure TORTURE to get through. While the memes that have been birthed from this were funny, this pathetic excuse for literature to me is NOT so bad it's good... rather it's so bad that I'd sooner have a papercut on my left testicle then have to read this godawful story again.

Where do I even begin with this tale? While I would initially write this off as a trollfic, the fact that Tara even wanted to continue this story after the hacker incident proves to me that she either was serious or so COMPLETELY dedicated to the joke that she simply has lost all semblance of reason. The spelling, grammar and punctuation are all total garbage and very inconsistent, the constant nagging for people to stop hating on the story was immature and a TERRIBLE idea, the dialogue made no sense, the story BARELY qualifies as a story and more just seems like a series of random events that happen with no rhyme or reason and finally I will make this clear.

FUCK Ebony as a character. FUCK this girl! She's not only a perfect example of what a true Mary Sue is, the excessive amount of attempts to make her "goffik" are just plain retarded. I sure hope Tara has grown up past this fanfiction because honestly... THIS is the worst thing that I've ever read!

Thanks for reposting it though, I needed a good example of what not to do with a fanfiction.
holy chapter 11 . 1/22/2016
That was torture
YES Last one chapter 11 . 1/22/2016
Snap clamed
Voleremortserum
Serverus (Sirius)
Luscious
Tom Bombodil111!
"so is dumblydor your princepill?" I shouted
barke lord
dumblydum
Voldemortserum?
"Lizzen Egogy..."
Snipe
Lumpkin
I laffed statically
...cloves were kinda drity...
Darko
Sorious
Ibony (I would think there only so many ways you can mess up spelling ONE name)
Abkhazian
Sodomize (I seriously can't think of who that's supposed to be)
time-torner
Profesor Slutborn the Portents teacher
Samoro (?)
Enopby (OH MY GOD)
Morty Mcfli
I must chapter 10 . 1/22/2016
Dumblydor
Dubleodre started to cockle
look for Series and Lucien- pornto!
Longdon
"Cum on Enoby." said Profesor Sinatra
Serifs (Snape)
Drake
"...Snope and Profesor McGoggle!1111"
"CUM NOW!1!" Preacher McGongel yielded
Snoop
Dumblehor
honkercheif
Snap
I STOPPED DA CURSE
Professor McGoogle
Snake
I almost put Snape because I forgot what his real name was
there was a Dork Mark on his you-know-wut!11!
Vrompire
Snipe
Dumbeldork
"...dondderhed!111" Snoop yielded
Drico
I can feel my mind deteriorating
must I do this chapter 9 . 1/22/2016
janitor Mr. Norris
Filth (the cat?) (yep, evidently she got their names mixed up)
Apparently she has visions now
Fug and da Mystery of Magic
Stanism
Doris Rumbridge
Dumbledore has alzheimers
Ebony
Dumbledum
Eboby
Darth Valer
Professor Trevolry
Trobbing you-know-what
Lucian and Serious
these fuckups chapter 8 . 1/22/2016
Volsemort and da Death Dealers
I was flattened
"Hajimemashite" (supposed to be Japanese) (according to Google translate it isn't)
Das niteMARE b4 xmas
"OMFFG DUMBLYDORE"
"loopin and snap tried to buy goffic camera pouch"
EBONDY
Dracula used to be called Navel
"By the way you can call me Albert." HE CALLED AS WE LEFT to our classes.
I TOOOK OUT A CIGARETE END STARTED TO smoke pot.
gong away
Snake
Dumbledork
cum instead of come x 4
dogfather Serious Blak (almost dead after that one)
ok im still here chapter 7 . 1/22/2016
Volsemort
Allah kedavra
"the fat guy that killed Cedric"
Snaketail
sex-pack
All of the wrist slitting
And Hilary Duff, h8 dat fukin bitch
squid chapter 5 . 1/22/2016
10/10
help me chapter 6 . 1/22/2016
I love it when Vampire points his womb at me and shouts 'ABRA KEDRAVA'
Also
Snap
HAIRgrid
Dumblydore
Professor McGoggle
Loopin
Until next time...?
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