Reviews for These Three
zozo42 chapter 16 . 10/25/2011
ahhh i loved this, cant wait to get onto the next one:)
zozo42 chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
i like this version of Abandon all hope better

this was a great start and i can't wait to read more
GalanthaDreams chapter 3 . 9/13/2011
How could I resist this story? :)
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 15 . 7/23/2011
*sigh* She's his girl...and he's gonna take her on a date. Beautifully done. Can't think of anything that would have made it any better. So sweet...

It may be silly...but I'm wondering if they're gonna go back and finish planting Ellen's tree together...
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 14 . 7/22/2011
True love conquers all. Glad the gang made it out safely. Poor Cas and his sapped energy. Love that Bobby also lectured Dean about hurting Jo.
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
Oh. My. God. You know, I thought you really had something with their first kiss being during an argument. But Dean telling Jo he loves her while she's possessed and about to slit his throat?

Speechless. Mind? Blown...
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 12 . 7/22/2011
Yes, I'm saying it again. Wow. Just...wow.

Jo reading Dean's thoughts on purpose. Dean not trying to block them from her. The "didn't get to tell her" part. *sigh* I love mushy romantic stuff...

I'm tickled that Cas saved Duke. I thought for sure he was dead. I'm a little nervous about Jo with the sword on Dean and Sam with the shotgun on Jo...but Cas did point out that he could fix gunshot wounds, right?
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 11 . 7/22/2011
You make me say "wow" a lot. So. Much. Drama.

I knew Duke wasn't gonna make it. Darn it. I also had every idea that it'd be to protect Jo. The dismemberment of pervy Mathew was a nice touch.

Re: soulmates: I feel oddly compelled to quote Friends, "Aww, he's her lobster..."
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 10 . 7/22/2011
Still giggling - "Are you talking porn?"

I probably should have pegged the whole Jo as Lelia's vessel thing. Maybe I would have if it wasn't 1:30 in the morning. Does it make you smile to know that your fic is like the novel you know you should put down in favor of a good night's sleep yet you can't stop reading? Thank God it's Saturday and I don't have to get up for work...

On to Jo's "long distance call" to Cas. :)
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 9 . 7/22/2011
Destiny. Babies. *giggle* Uncle Sam. Foreshadow much? Sam being protective and wanting to ensure that Dean and Jo weren't part of some angel plot was very sweet.

Jo being able to read minds was unexpected. I was thinking demon spawn and then "no, she wouldn't..." Jo calling Dean on the girlfriend thing and wanting to have sex was too funny...Dean mentally singing Back in Black was absolute icing.
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 8 . 7/22/2011
As my good friend K would say, "aww, smoosh..."

Really loved this chapter...though I have a sneaking suspicion that father figure Duke is not going to make it out alive.

It's always interesting to get an introspective look into Dean because while he's rough and calloused on the outside, he's far from the empty shell Famine said he was. You are really portraying that quite well. He knows he's flawed, worries he's unworthy...but has an incredible tenderness with Jo and the depth of his feelings is so believable.

Excellent work...don't mind me as I commense with the sighing and move on to the next chapter. Because I don't think I've said it yet, thanks for sharing this and all of what I've read so far.
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 7 . 7/22/2011
Wow. Now *that* was the perfect first kiss for Jo and Dean - not as she was dying but nose to nose in the heat of an argument. I'm positively giddy. That was well worth waiting for.

Backtracking for a moment, this: "Oh for the love of…" Jo groaned, closing her eyes and slapping her palm to her forehead.? Yeah, that was right on the money. All the little humorous little bits you weave in are a real treat - Dean provoking the demons to get into camp was a great example of that.

And Sam telling Cas to stick it because they were rescuing everybody regardless of an impending time limit...plus Cas's reaction to Dean acting crazy because he's in love? You rock. This is eight different shades of awesome.
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 6 . 7/22/2011
I don't know what I got a bigger kick out of with this one...Sam and Dean being skittish about Cas winking them to another dimension or snarling protective Dean storming towards the demon camp.

Why do I get the distinct feeling that Dean is headed in to save Jo, but she'll ultimately end up rescuing him when he does something rash?
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 5 . 7/22/2011
Awww...planting a tree for Ellen. What a wonderful gesture.

Things are ramping up and getting exciting with the primal demon thing. Hope the boys come up with a plan quickly.
Mali Bear's Buddy chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
I'm sort of happy dancing that I was right about her hearing their conversation. Sneaking away in the middle of the night strikes me as exactly what Jo would do. You really do a great job capturing her fiery spirit. Thoroughly enjoyed Sam and Dean's talk. I'm with Sam on this - he'll lose her if he doesn't tread lightly...
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