Reviews for Invitation Back To Hell
sriharshinisubramani chapter 8 . 6/17
Excellent fanfiction
Guest chapter 3 . 1/29/2017
Wait. So did they take abby home yet?
EdwardsGuardianAngel chapter 8 . 2/15/2016
Hope things get better for you & really really looking forward to updates on all your stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
Too much going on. You don't have to talk about every tour. I just ended up scrolling past it
brnkofeternity06 chapter 4 . 6/26/2015
Good chapter :) I like the closure going on
brnkofeternity06 chapter 3 . 6/26/2015
Wow! Jessica and Lauren in one chapter! Not to mention an adorable orphan girl who they're going to adopt :D Abby is so adorable!
brnkofeternity06 chapter 2 . 6/26/2015
So they're back in Forks and Edward has his Bella and friends there for support. I really like it :) Emmett's comment had me cracking up to :D
brnkofeternity06 chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Wow! What a start! Can't wait to read more :D
Mrs. B.Cullen.x chapter 4 . 11/15/2014
Hey, your story is good, but i was wondering, you said that Abby is three, but when she talks she said like shes around eleven or twelve, a three year old wouldnt be able to talk that fluently, im not trting to sound mean, but i thought that you should know. And also when when you are replying to an I love you, 'to' becomes too and doesnt stay the same
Guest chapter 7 . 5/11/2013
Please please please STOP USING THE WORD PRINCESS. thankyou
rowenasheir chapter 6 . 1/13/2013
Who looked after Abby? She will still be very sore after an appendix op, It took me 3 weeks befoe I could even sit comfortably.
rowenasheir chapter 4 . 1/13/2013
Surely it is not that easy to adopt a kid in the USA?!
rowenasheir chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
I know my review will not make a difference as I am only reading it complete in 2013 but surely Edward would be giving talks etc. on bullying to help parents and also victims. It does definately affect you well into adult lfe and also the choics you make.
rclaurel chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
Great story, I hope one day you will be able to finish...
Kim Ginsberg chapter 7 . 5/23/2012
this is good, please continue
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