Reviews for Claymore and Naruto: Children of Destiny
Browilliams chapter 11 . 10/15
if u read this i love your story please update
SargentFalco chapter 11 . 9/23
Hmmm so far I'm loving this story Naruto taking on an abyssal one and now he has Kurama backing him up so now things are looking up hopefully you'll continue this story it's really good.
Jose19 chapter 6 . 9/16
Naruto is really screwed right now if Madara is here who in the hell can fight him because Madara is impossible to fight him by yourself he is one of the strongest Shinobi of all time.
Jose19 chapter 4 . 9/16
I love what Teresa did in the Claymore she chose to live as a Human and be there for Claire and the ending of this series was fantastic because she is still alive inside of Claire.
ricky ross uzumaki chapter 11 . 8/20
It has been two years :)
The Rupture chapter 11 . 7/15
You haven't updated at all.
wdog44 chapter 11 . 6/27
Please continue this wonderful story! The writing and plot are fantastic and I would live to see it continued!
Guest9000 chapter 11 . 6/1
Help...we need an update v.v
Masterx01 chapter 2 . 4/8
Seriously? Im not so much of a savvy of Claymore but Sakura can pack quite the mean punch easily able of carve a long trench or make a quite nice crater in the floor bigger than herself.

And i think that the conversation with Teresa was bad handled or Naruto was just being highly stupid even in his own standarts. I generaly found the idea of telling someone that youre a dimensionaly misplaced person without that someone being a person highly thrustworty as something highly stupid, almost as stupid ,if not more, as telling some stranger personal information, that youre rich and that you dont know a thing about the place in which you are... Basically, you are just seeking problems.

If that conversation would have been a questions and answers session between the two and just not an oneside massive retelling from Naruto info dumping Teresa this wouldnt have been so bad... but as it stand, this was bad handled. And it doesnt made sense from Naruto part... Where is the ninja paranoia? Even if he isnt the sharpest tool in the box he should know better than just spill the beans that way.

While there are some similarities between Claymores and Jinchuurikis, the propuse of ther creation is quite diferent... One as a mean to fight against a supernaturtal threat and the other a tools and weapons for war or just basicaly scare the others due then being akin to nuclear weapons.
Masterx01 chapter 3 . 4/8
I dont remember Nature chakra being any sort of regenerative energy or any sort of energy that multiplies the healing factor of someone... You just pulled that out. Naruto just heals fast due Kurama chakra and his own Uzumaki bloodline which also are the very same factors that causes his seemly unexaustive amount of stamina and chakra.

That doesnt make sense... If Naruto can sense Yoma and Claymore energy how it was that he didnt notice Teresa when he was in sage mode? In that mode he have a absurdly big chakra sensing abilities that can cover hundreds of kilometers easily.

I find rather strange thst the first thing that Naruto though about when his jutsu failed is that his world, a complete world, was no more... Couldnt have thinked at least that his home world was metaphysicaly too far away that the jutsu couldnt even work because it wasnt designed having extra-dimensional travel in mind?

Also why he is so fixed with Sakura? Hinata didnt confest to him during Pein attack over Konoha? Why keep going for the girl that will never give you an oportunity when you have a girl that it is disposed to risk her life because she loves you?
Masterx01 chapter 1 . 4/8
Well, seen how old this AN is, its understandable but Madara is way stronger than Naruto, so much that even Kishimoto said that he made him so powerful that he dont know what to do with him, so made that retcon with Kaguya and the rest is story.

The other thing is that apparently Claymore characters, after they begun to transform into Yomas to deal with Priscilla and all what came after that, they become absurdly fast characters, pretty much so more than Naruto characters except for some of those who gained an End-manga power up.

The bijus arent demons, and they arent 'evil' just because... It were the humans who made them the way they are due their overall 'nice' treatement they give to them during their near thousand years of existence.
ivanganev1992 chapter 11 . 3/21
Ch 11 So Even if Naruto is this time not so well educated and trained with jutasu still is strong at least one fourth or half Kuubi and LUCIELA SAIKEN NEKOMANTA IS BELOW KUUBI SINCHRONED NARUTO
. TTHA IS PURE 2 TAILS OF NINE . ANd share the secret now .
UnderlandFox-0 chapter 11 . 3/12
I'll admit: I was skeptical of this story at first. But, now I am extremely hoping you'll be able to update this soon. This last chapter had me laughing quite heartily at the ending, because of course Naruto had to antagonize her further. Nonetheless, you have made me hooked onto this, and hoping you will be hit very soon with inspiration. Your writing style is lovely, and while there are a few mistakes, the sentences flow into one another like a naturally formed river untouched by mankind. I hope your day find you well, and that you will be able to update this sooner or later.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/8
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Anon chapter 11 . 1/8
This is still easily the best Naruto/Claymore crossover! All the best and update whenever you can!
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