Reviews for Broken Sunsets
April-Showers82 chapter 21 . 6/25
I'm glad that things worked out for Jake and Bella. There were so many times that I wanted to shake some sense into Bella. Nevertheless, she finally saw the light. I'm also proud of Jacob growing up and into the man that he was always meant to be. I loved your transition from fixing junked cars to construction with woodcarving on the side. A great idea! You've done a great job with this story.
Julius chapter 1 . 3/12
I kinda understand Bella I felt the same when I was me love was nothing but some chemical reaction in was bulshit for me.
rorosmile chapter 7 . 1/18
Wow what a day...
rorosmile chapter 6 . 1/18
Hmmmm bells and jake both have some issues to workout...
rorosmile chapter 5 . 1/16
Oh boy what was Jake thinking by coming to the swan home?
rorosmile chapter 4 . 1/16
Hmmmm jake have alot to think about...
rorosmile chapter 3 . 1/16
wow what a day of surprises ... The battle is on what will they do now?
rorosmile chapter 2 . 1/15
Hmmm i wonder if jake is taking rose words to heart...
rorosmile chapter 1 . 1/15
Wow what a chapter bella is in for a surprise. ...
aaa chapter 10 . 2/11/2016
esta bella tal vez sea la mas perra , egoísta , mala tipa . en todo fanfiction .
como la odia
esta historia es ridícula copia mal hecha de la película sweet home alabama.
slay1angel chapter 1 . 7/5/2014
I really love your stories but when you clump your words that your using in bold and as thoughts its really really hard to read and it stops the flow of the story but otherwise your very good and I love your imagination
MySweetEscape chapter 9 . 2/18/2014
Maybe it's because I have old fashion emotions of dating, but I truly don't see the point of dating someone (especially in your twenties - as a teenager it's different) when there isn't even the possibility that you could want to marry them. *shrugs*
MySweetEscape chapter 6 . 2/18/2014
Even though she seemed a villain at first (lol), THANK GOD for Alice pointing out Bella leaving was more of a Bella thing than a Jacob thing. Thus, still seeing this mess as all Bella's fault...
MySweetEscape chapter 5 . 2/18/2014
I want to try to be fair, so I'm going to need to see proof that Jake was a smothering jerk. So far I can only see Bella being a selfish brat... I will say when she mentioned her dreams maybe he should have talked more with her about them, included himself. But Bella also seems to suggest she simply wanted to experience life without him, not just outside or Forks, so she should have broke up with him long before things got to the point that it did.
MySweetEscape chapter 3 . 2/18/2014
Bella, give me a break! Maybe it's just me, but I don't see how anyone can blame Jake or feel sorry for Bella. He didn't get her pregnant I purpose to trap her. He married her selfish butt even though she basically threw his love back in his face. People should dislike/hate her. She deserves it. I'm not saying she shouldn't have had dreams bigger than Forks or shouldn't have been sad that she had to change them, but she could have been more mature about handling that. She didn't have to spew hate and nastiness and blame. She didn't have to run. But she did. So f*cking deal with it, Bella.

(Again, don't know why I didn't rant more about her the first time around. I must have been to caught up in the story :] )
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