| Reviews for Loss of Control |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2021 Please write more it very good |
 fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 10/20/2020 Wow |
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 3/17/2019 All that is good and holy...bajeebus...hot dang! I don’t care that it is weird to be jealous of a fictional character! I need to reread this again. And again. |
| tawelephant chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 Hot damn. |
| CSG chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 I'd say you made the right decision. I run "The Twilight Fan Fiction Finders." Feel free to post your updates in there, if you want to. Thanks for sharing this with us. I enjoyed it. |
| nzjojo chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 Awesome story very well written - I could imagine it all! Thank you :) |
| debslmac chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 :):) |
| jenna grey chapter 1 . 7/18/2016 Love this! Thank you! It's always interesting to see both perspectives. |
| michigangal0223 chapter 1 . 3/11/2016 hot hot |
| NanStew chapter 1 . 9/14/2015 Wow, what a beginning. Going to read the rest now. Love it. |
| Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 9/2/2015 Oh yummy! Thanks for sharing. |
| dpennell007 chapter 1 . 8/21/2015 Very nice! I Love how Edward is such a talker. And how they barely made it in the door. |
| KimiD chapter 1 . 5/8/2015 Holy Shite~! Well, they finally introduced themselves... LOL |
| 2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Wow, that was hot, and Bella barely said a word! Wish there was more, I would really like to know about these characters...what is Edward's deal? Will they see each other again? I know this is years old, but I would love more! |
| Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 Damn, that was HOT! Great job! I would have never guessed it was your first lemon. Well done. I wish there was more. Thanks for sharing. |