Reviews for Loss of Control
NanStew chapter 1 . 9/14
Wow, what a beginning. Going to read the rest now. Love it.
Sassyvampmama chapter 1 . 9/2
Oh yummy! Thanks for sharing.
dpennell007 chapter 1 . 8/21
Very nice! I Love how Edward is such a talker. And how they barely made it in the door.
KimiD chapter 1 . 5/8
Holy Shite~! Well, they finally introduced themselves... LOL
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 2/21
Wow, that was hot, and Bella barely said a word! Wish there was more, I would really like to know about these characters...what is Edward's deal? Will they see each other again? I know this is years old, but I would love more!
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 2/15
Damn, that was HOT! Great job! I would have never guessed it was your first lemon. Well done. I wish there was more. Thanks for sharing.
Pia Cullen Masen chapter 1 . 1/29
The last sentence! Phew! Well it stranger sure did keep his promise! I truly did like this story and well it was sure a heck of a ride! Thank you for sharing such a great story! Chilly kisses from Florida!
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 1/6
omg, you so need to continue this!
so hot, loved it and perfectly described with the loss of control
thanks for sharing and perfectly done first lemon
would love to have you write for SML sometime if you up for the challenge
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
My goodness . . . that was incredibly fuck hot! *fanning self* I loved it . . . yummy!
Mom23xx chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
Damn...smokin hot. You did great
Nannyjojo chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
Damn, I think I want an Edward like this of my own
JD Thorn chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Super good
TakeMetoItaly chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I read EPOV before reading this. It was great reading how Bella viewed their first meeting. I love the descriptions of Edward and the picture of Charlie kissing Edward was hilarious. Great job!
jansails chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
You shut the door on us!
Oh you're sadistic ;-P
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