Reviews for A Broken Man
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Very sweet and lovely!
mw138 chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Great job! I swooned a little bit when I got to the end! :)
CrystalMichelle chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Loved it...more pls
DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Loved it!...I hope they both find happiness together. Would love to see it continue.
Duchess Michelle chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Aww, maybe they'll both find a slice of happiness. Gotta say though, I wasn't expecting a slash pairing on this one.

I'm a ski instructor too though :)
Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
I loved it... Everybody deserves love, no matter how broken you are... just never give up hope... good luck in the contest...

Take care
tiffaninichole chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Poor Edward :-( I wonder what happened, what left him so messed up, mentally and physically.

I loved that Jas was a musician. Guitarsper is a weakness of mine... well, ANY Jasper is a weakness! LOL!

Good job!
Alby Mangroves chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Is the answer: "Why yes, yes you may!"

I can see this one progressing! Nicely done in 500 words :)