Reviews for The Monster Within
DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
Wow. that was dark. im not sure what else to say hahaha

great job, it was well written

good luck!
Drowning in Chaos chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
magnificent plot. Well told. Good luck.
shadow4kissed chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
My complete respects in this. Although it's really short and I want to know more of it, you have gained my attention.

Great job and kudos on your monster.

DarkOneBL chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Very dark, but well written.
Robpfan chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Oh I love this... so easy for someone to flip out and end up like this... you never know how you would react unless you were in the situation yourself...

good luck with the contest...

Take care
Duchess Michelle chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Wow. That one was different.
MeLOVE3 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
like wow, really.
DreamingPoet1988 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
WOW, thats all i can say is wow