|Reviews for Crossing Paths|
| Roxasrock chapter 12 . 3/6
Quite the amazing story so far. Could have had a bit more romance, but is amazing so far to say the least. Update soon!
| Zac chapter 12 . 2/6
Good but more interaction with feldt and setsuna would be great.
But still really great
| AshHowl chapter 12 . 7/21/2013
Oh my goodness...I need more...XD
| Kiiroi Senko chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
Wow. I mean, just... WOW. This is the AU Gundam 00 fic I've been searching for all my fanfiction life. I have to say that this is one brilliant piece of work, my friend. I'm only saddened I didn't find it sooner, because it robs me of the chance to review each and every flipping chapter and add to that total of yours.
I don't know how you're doing it, but you just have this way of writing the now and the later at the same time. Everything just fits so well together. The interactions, the setting, the backstory, Ribbons' sheer unadulterated bastardry which you somehow manage to draw out and make him drown in...
Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I'd talk more about it, but I'm writing a review, not a novel here. I hope you can keep this up! I'm deeply impressed! :D
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/4/2013
Your Efforts Are Nice Best FanFiction Ever , But Could You Please Make Another Chapter? Or Your'e Already Making One? Pleease Add More Emotional THINGS , Loves , And Alot Of Happy Happening o.
This Chapter Won't Let Me Keep Silent ! Please I Really Want DAT Last Chapter!
| Taysh3 chapter 12 . 3/31/2013
Updaaate already! Pleeeaaaaaseeee! Im dying to know whats next.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/15/2013
Im a Setsuna x Marina/Setsuna x Feldt fan
I Looooove this fanfic 3
You're such a talented author.
Much Love! .
| Youichi-Zarasuha chapter 12 . 3/15/2013
so detailed, i don't even know what military weapon that much
i'll waiting for the next chapter!
| Mikazuki Mitsukai chapter 12 . 1/26/2013
Stage fright? Hahaha... We have something in common here, Feldt... .
I have one question, btw. The gang's not staying at the hospital after Feldt's discharged, right? Where did they crash to?
| Salaeren chapter 12 . 1/16/2013
| Alex chapter 12 . 1/14/2013
yes i finally read it the next chapter hahahahh i cant wait to read what happens next. please update :):D:)
| Chaos Invoker chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Just read this first chapter, it seems decent enough for a start. SetsuFeldt isn't even my OTP (SetsuNena / SetsuRina is), but this one looks nice enough for it not to matter.
Will continue reading on tomorrow
| The Bell of Daybreak chapter 12 . 1/13/2013
Epic. Once I am blown away by the fantastic way that this is written. Keep it up!
P.S. This is my 00 nerd speaking, you did a good job of explaining everything well :)
| Naishu chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
So, I got halfway through this chapter yesterday and then ended up having to run to work, so I've just finished the other half.
I didn't find this confusing at all! I think italics have become the number one indication of flashbacks, so the fact that the past pieces were in italics helped. I liked the idea of the festival and thier plan to divulge their secrets. I also love the tongue-in-cheek "We were only testing our theory when those mobile suits were destroyed!" It reminded me a lot of a display that the Engineering faculty here puts on (though obviously not with such high-level people attending...maybe the provincial big-shots and a few key theorists. Either way). Of course Ribbons would be front-and-center.
Its interesting that Feldt had the thought about her parents deaths when she was on-stage, but then again sometimes the brightest ideas come to you when you're doing something random. It was nice to see her channel her frustrations with Ribbons and her stage-fright into a productive presentation.
I saw one little grammar fix:
"The people couldn't experiencing what Feldt and Setsuna had been through", 'experiencing' should be 'experience'. Probably just one of those fixes that writer-eyes tend to skim over when finishing up.
Yay! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| Surrealistic chapter 12 . 1/11/2013
Not confused, it was...so...epic w u are awesome.