|Reviews for Traveling|
| rednightmare chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
Ooh. So glad I stumbled on this. Elegant and really nicely framed - each snippet. Compiling these individual mini-character studies into one ball makes the overall one-shot really forceful, and the connecting theme is strong enough so it doesn't feel at all forced. Great job.
I think Varric's bit is my favorite... the ending passage about Hawke was just excellently him.
| IdealisticSoul chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I liked this oneshot story.
I think that you should continue it.
At first, I thought that the two couples - Alistair and Irien and Anders and Hawke - would meet and somehow help each other.
It could be very interesting.
Very well written for an unbeta'd story and finished in just two days!
| Medivi chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
This has a lovely flow, I particularly enjoy how you tie it all together with the theme of traveling. Nice work!