Reviews for The Pain of Mating
natztash chapter 9 . 2/20
Please please update
Michelle Law chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
I'm glad you didn't have Bella turn into an obedient little robot! and I'm glad Jasper is, for now anyway, going along with her request to leave the Cullens.
aphrodite4986 chapter 9 . 10/22/2016
is there more?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/29/2015
Awesome story. Ty for sharing your writing talent and story.
AHealingRenaissance chapter 9 . 3/27/2015
Oooh! I like this fic! I like any fic where Alice is told no, but this is good even besides that! Hope you can update again soon!
Eileenapr chapter 9 . 2/22/2015
What a pity this story was never finished, totally loved it.
NannaRahRah chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
i like so far
nikolasowa chapter 9 . 10/17/2014
PLEASE UPDATE!
twlightbella chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
Jasper and Bella are mates
wantonlytoread chapter 9 . 6/29/2014
Wow great story thank you. Are you leaving it there? :(
chanur chapter 9 . 4/15/2014
Excellent chapter. Loved your Major and their first encounter went pretty well.
Please please please, update soon. I can't wait for more.
chanur chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
Woaaa, that was an excellent chapter!
I can't understand Alice and Peter's reactions. I think it's a good thing to go away from the family, a little alone time to get to know each other.
Has Peter gone crazy? He should know better.
chanur chapter 7 . 4/14/2014
Loved this chapter. It's a beginning. And it's a good thing that she understand that she is not weak, she also can make decision for the two of them
chanur chapter 6 . 4/14/2014
Loved it
chanur chapter 5 . 4/14/2014
Good decision. He should have explained everything about mating in the beginning.
Great chapter.
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