|Reviews for The Pain of Mating|
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/29/2015
Awesome story. Ty for sharing your writing talent and story.
| AHealingRenaissance chapter 9 . 3/27/2015
Oooh! I like this fic! I like any fic where Alice is told no, but this is good even besides that! Hope you can update again soon!
| Eileenapr chapter 9 . 2/22/2015
What a pity this story was never finished, totally loved it.
| NannaRahRah chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
i like so far
| nikolasowa chapter 9 . 10/17/2014
| twlightbella chapter 4 . 8/20/2014
Jasper and Bella are mates
| wantonlytoread chapter 9 . 6/29/2014
Wow great story thank you. Are you leaving it there? :(
| chanur chapter 9 . 4/15/2014
Excellent chapter. Loved your Major and their first encounter went pretty well.
Please please please, update soon. I can't wait for more.
| chanur chapter 8 . 4/15/2014
Woaaa, that was an excellent chapter!
I can't understand Alice and Peter's reactions. I think it's a good thing to go away from the family, a little alone time to get to know each other.
Has Peter gone crazy? He should know better.
| chanur chapter 7 . 4/14/2014
Loved this chapter. It's a beginning. And it's a good thing that she understand that she is not weak, she also can make decision for the two of them
| chanur chapter 6 . 4/14/2014
| chanur chapter 5 . 4/14/2014
Good decision. He should have explained everything about mating in the beginning.
| chanur chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
Poor Bella. I would be freaked too.
| chanur chapter 3 . 4/14/2014
OH Oh oh. Well , we can say that he really got carried away.
| chanur chapter 2 . 4/14/2014
Great chapter. Bella is very brave to try to know them. They basically destroyed her life.